Love it please write more

Very cool! Loved seeing Oliver through Quentin's eyes, especially when it was the angsty bits or when Quentin realised how badass Oliver is.

Thank you for your greay stories. I have only recently discovered fanfiction and specifically Arrow stories. You arr definetly one of my favorite writers You make me laugh and cry in public! Please keep on writing

What have you heard about the season? Especially Olicity? I've heard good things, but I want to know what you've heard.

And before I forget, the story is great, keep up the good work.

Yeah it is angsty but its still a good chapter.

This was absolutely emotional I could hardly breathe. So sad, but my tears wouldn't fall. I was terrified at the thought of Oliver even contemplating committing suicide because of Prometheus. Right now my chest feels heavy and my gut is churning.

I liked how you took Susan Williams and Evelyn out of the picture in realistic ways. And I think a burnt-out hero coming around full circle to the beginning of season 1 is also not too hard to imagine at the end of season 5. Yeah, it's like closing a chapter in Oliver Queen's life. I just hope that Felicity would still be part of the next chapter.

I really like the concept for this fic. Lance's point of view provides back stories for Oliver's character so well, from his childhood to the latest season/episode. The chapters I really liked were the ones about Oliver being tactile and communicating with his hands, the one about him being good with kids, the one about saying please, and this one about honesty. You're doing a good job!

Do update soon. Could you do a chapter on how Oliver deals with his tendency to blame himself when things go bad? He's doing it again as the mid-season finale closed with him killing Felicity's boyfriend by mistake. I figure during the winter hiatus he's going to engage in a lot of self-blame because of the trouble that Felicity, Diggle, and Curtis got themselves into. Thanks!

This was really, really nice! Oliver good with kids - yeah, I can imagine that. Daddy Oliver is always fun to read about. :-)

This chapter about Oliver's touch and the previous chapter about him and alcohol - you've really nailed his characterization. Splendid! Loved how the best tipsy lines he'd ever said and the gentlest of his touches have always been with her and for her.

Yeah, I liked the ridiculously fluffy sweetness towards the end :-)

I loved this chapter for three things: 1) You eliminated Malcolm Merlyn from the Arrowverse here. I really hate that villain. To me, he's the worst of all of the Arrows enemies because he sometimes pretends to be an ally. 2) You got OQ to pray, even when it was just during the times that mattered, because that says that he (perhaps even you) really believe in a deity outside of the cosmos that people can call on. 3) That ring! It was so sweet of OQ to give FS a ring that represented every aspect of him, signifying how much he loves her. Kudos!

Really nice take on Season 3 :-) I'm going to keep reading.

Love your writing so much and would love to read the William story!

I'll say this, the story of your's is really good. The only thing that kills it for me it just another Olicity fic that been done over a million times by other writers. 8/10.

Hey !
I'm french so sorry if there are faults ...
Your story is amazing and I hope you update soon.
I really like Olicity. How not to love them ?
I look forward to reading the next chapter ;)