My only issue with this fic is that you could probably cut out 60% of this fic. It seems like I would end up skimming over the majority of the fight scenes because the were just copy and pasted from the anime. Loved the concept, however, the actuality of this fic didn't quite fall through for me. Good news is that with Natsu out of fairy tail there's a much higher chance of original fights happening. Hope to see some more flashbacks of Natsu and the game during the timeskip.

Didn't Gray meet Ultear in Edolas? Shouldn't there at least be a mention of that or something? Other then that great chapter

really hoping to see some natsu x ultear flashbacks. also that ending with lissanna was shocking

Fuck noooo! preggy Lisanna.. imma drop this shit

Explain when natsu fight against someone we don't know how much strenght he use if he is at 50% 75%...

I hope that u change the fate of Ultear because I really like her character a lot

My proof that in chapter 59 that is Natsu’s and Lissana child and I quote
“The scene for the two of them in the hut came from this short comic I found online. And for the record, yes. They did the deed. Now we get to the big arc of the story. Tenrou island is next and I know you're going to love it.”
so yes this is my proof and evidence in is my head canon nothing will change my mind i can't wait for the next chapter stay safe and i hope you update soon

That is obviously Natsu’s kid they had sex when Lissana returned from edolas when they kiss at the hut when the were little, in the arthur notes you said the did the deed. Jesus fucking christ i was hoping this story would be Natsu/Lissana but then i remembered how I found the story to begin with I was looking for a Natsu/Ultear but now there is a chance that it will be Lissana/Natsu/Ultear and i am so happy about it. By the way I read this entire story and one day I normally read NatsuxLissana story's but today I felt adventurous I looked up NatsuxUltear then I was so cross between my favorite pairing and my third favorite pairing (my second favorite pairing is NatsuxMira) MANNNNN WHY DID I HAVE TO FINISH THIS GREAT STORY IN ONE DAY I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER AHHHHHHHHH! With my rent aside like I said I really love the story can’t wait for the next update stay safe and hope you update soon XD

update please

Just out of curiosity, what's your opinion on Edolas Lucy?

Dude I’m so glad you didn’t give up on this story cause I kept on reading over and over again

It’s so good. Also, gasp! Lisanna is prego! Whose kid could it be?!

I've been waiting for this

Man you really like following canon though your changes are decent and at times unpredictable...Zancrow and Erza that gotta be the one of the most unique original and bizarre pairings in this site, nice that Natsu and Ultear are together and happy...Wait what Lisanna is pregnant?! Elfman is gonna kill some poor fool unless plot twist turns out to be Natsu...

Yay NatsuxUltear! Forgot about this Fic to be honest, glad to see it updated.

-ATNF