THERE WERE SO MANY good lines in this one! Especially about her “wholeemotional structure crashing down on her” I love that phrase! You are great at dialogue too. And YES she deserves to be overwhelmed by happiness and him too. YAY

This was so incredibly powerful! I loved all of it.

this is truly, wonderfully, beautiful.

So beautiful.

I 100000% agree that at some point after their reunion, Kagome would finally break down and Inuyasha would finally spill all his deeply rooted feelings for her. This was lovely and heartbreaking and wonderful all at the same time.

What? Crying? Me? No, I'm not crying. Someone, uh, just...came and...cried on my face?

[Distant cheers of joy and happiness]

And then they do it, and the next morning, she discovers he's a hairy hanyou :D

I loved this story of yours. Very sweet ending to the show.

wow this is so touching! Great job! :D

so sweet and emotional, i was getting teary eyed. love the happy!
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T.T You write these two so good; it kills me. Holy crap, I don't even like romance but, here am I, wishing I could hug my computer monitor without getting in trouble!

Man, this was fantastic~! Holy crap~! Those two are so beautiful together!

-KW13

Good.

I completely agree with you! Thanks for Sharing! :)

I love a happy ending this was just wonderful and romantic. I had to read it through twice and the second time I cried for joy with her. Thank-you for the happy tears. Cheers.