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Orvidas chapter 9 . 12/20/2017 I clicked on this story only planning to read a chapter or two before going to sleep and next thing I know I've blazed through all nine chapters written so far. I especially love how you've written Connie here. I really feel the loneliness that Connie expressed during her outburst in Bubble Buddies. I look forward to the next chapter. |
jasongd chapter 9 . 11/30/2017 Very good story congrats I'll be witing for next chapter |
SneaselXRiolu chapter 8 . 8/15/2015 SXR: I really enjoy how you write Connie. the way you write her is... Grunkle Stan(cannonically from Gravity Falls): It's just like my life! In a way. SXR: Yeah! just like MY life |
SophieRosey2001 chapter 7 . 8/11/2015 PLEASE UPDATE SOON! |
SneaselXRiolu chapter 7 . 8/9/2015 Poor Connie. If this showed up in the show, I would cry even more. This really great, very realistic. I can totally relate to Connie in this. Once I went to a school dance when I was in 7th grade, it was a throwback dance. I mainly went to it because my friends would be there, but they never showed up. I danced to the song Beat It, using the origional dance moves only to find at the end people staring at me... I ran off to the back of the gym and hid under the bleachers till the dance was over. |
Dalekz universe chapter 7 . 8/8/2015 I like this chapter. Could you give me the link to the song. |
Dante Watterson chapter 7 . 8/8/2015 Good job. :) |
SophieRosey2001 chapter 6 . 7/26/2015 OOOOHHHH SO CUTE |
PearlLazuli chapter 1 . 7/5/2015 YES THANK YOU ONE WHERE THEY DONT HAVE SEX I LOVE YOU THANK YOU |
SneaselXRiolu chapter 6 . 7/4/2015 SXR: Funky Flow reference! Daw... Dude, make Connie actualy notice it but to shy to say hi! It'll be so Kawaii! Obsidean: I TOLD YOU TO NEVER SAY THAT AGAIN!*tackles SXR.* SXR: Connie's story should be interesting. Jade: SHE SAID WHAT!?*Tackles SXR* SXR: Why me? |
SneaselXRiolu chapter 5 . 7/4/2015 SXR: Aww... StevenXConnie for life! Kim: Hey the Friday's episode os Steven Bomb #3 is "Friend Ship." SXR: Let me guess, an Onion episode? Kim: That's Wendsday. SXR: Lars and Sadie? Kim: That was "Island Adventure." SXR: Who else do we know has something to do with boats? Kim: Well, Connie said that's what she did before she met Steven. SXR:... Steven... X... CONNIE! |
anawinkaro chapter 6 . 7/3/2015 I want to read Connie's part! It's really good. :D Keep writing! |
SneaselXRiolu chapter 4 . 7/3/2015 But Steven has Peedee. Unless he's too busy in the Frybo buisness. And the family catchphrase felt natural being put there. |
SneaselXRiolu chapter 3 . 7/3/2015 SXR: Man, your good at writing stories that are much like the show! I'm jealous. Citrine: Jealothy(Jealosy) updated!? SXR: Uh, no. Citrine: Aw, man. |
SneaselXRiolu chapter 2 . 7/3/2015 So this is a flashback, and that's why it's all in italics right? Also post the song melody onto YouTube? PLEASE!? |