What i'm wondering is where team RWBY is hiding all the eggs, cubs and puppy's?

This got really weird really fucking quickly, I can't keep reading.

Well, actually, it should be fairly easy for them to escape, which makes this sorta, eh. The more damage Yang sustains the more she can dish out, so she should have had enough to break away. Ruby, she can split into clouds of pedals and run at high speeds, escape is easy.

I know this was last updated 2016, but did you really need to have them give birth as well.

the lunch are gonna eat your krauts

yo citrus, your a programmer aren't you, cause you tried closing a text box in this chapter you was going to write /p

Wow... Okay then.

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making ruby a futa was beyond shitty

I am also a writter. Though I've never posted or had some one review my work un-electronically, I would like to give you advise. OC are very entryging as the have infinite possibilities. Make sure you pic the right one. Please take take this as a hate comment as I have no intention to make it so.

Holy... Hell. This chapter, right here, is some of the BEST writing I have ever had the pleasure to read.
Congratulations, and for gods sake, keep up the good work!

Sympathy for the devil much?

well then holy shit this is getting dark and about 8 more chapters for me to read

that was...um...something

i imagine blake will be displeased i kinda want to see blake take her mother