a cute story, its nice and I really enjoy it, one of the more believable TMNT fanfictions I think.

This story is really good

I clicked the review button

OMG... You write Raph so good I'm kind of jealous.

Thanks for the shout out, no problem, like I reviewed earlier if you need too bounce off ideas I'll be happy to help.
I really liked this chapter by the way, these two are dealing with the same issues any other couple who rushed into a physical relationship deals with. A date at home or on a roof top would easily be romantic with the right effort, plus it would be good for them to get past the physical attraction and really get too know one another. Also I really love the little talks splinter is having with him.
PS introducing a little jealousy wouldn't be a bad idea but don't be cliche, keep it creative.

Keep it up, and I'll look forward to your next chapter.

Loved the text exchange, cute. I could totally see gen save Raph from a rogue roach.

Well thank god you got past your writer's block! But if you ever need someone to bounce ideas on if be glad to help

Love it, the sneaky boyfriend and the need to be near each other, I think Raphael has it bad

This one of the reasons I love Raphael, he's spontaneous and a tough guy but a good turtle.

Cute little karaoke moment. I can totally see them all making the singing a regular thing. Love it

A little krang drama never hurt anyone... sort of. Loved it. Very hot scene at the end. Dang Raphael is getting some serious action

Cute wake-up call, but I would have killed Micky too

There it is, the brotherly reading and the teenage ass attitude that I was waiting on.

I like the little exchange between the brothers but it's hard to imagine them taking it so well, they're teen boys after all.

Well I did enjoy the chapter but it was a bit sudden. Like "sorry- kiss- sex" very little build up. But otherwise I enjoyed it, it did go rather smoothly for two virgins who didn't know what to do. But still not bad.