It was AMAZING!

Love the alternate ending. Wish it didn’t end there though.

The alternate ending was so beautiful! Best part of the whole story by far

that was good

I should take the stele and run

I love the story and an alternative ending ️

nooooooooooooooo

poor jace

I don't think I can read anymore this story is really good but I don't want to read another story where Jonathan Dies I cry my eyes out and I just don't want to cry so I'm just going to pretend they got married because she couldn't go through with the plan yep that's what i'm doing.

Fanfictions with stockholms ? I could only find a few of the mortal instruments... Any references?

I liked this fan fiction. I haven't read many like it. Personally I preferred the original ending, though.

I like Sebastian as well, so I really do like this ending better.
Also, did you cry at the end of Jonathen/Sebastians death?
I love this whole story though.

I love evanescence too!
Sadly though, no one seems to have any idea who they are. :(

Oh yay

I totally agree with you and I'm a fan of Jon. I actually found it hot when he tried to seduce Clary. When I read the original books, Jon didn't feel like her brother so it was easy to accept the incest part of it. They didn't look alike, they were not raised together; they were strangers. I would have had a hard time picking between Jon and Jace. I wondered if Clary picked Jon, if it would have calmed him down, like Jace. This is a great story! Love it!