Your writing is some of the best that I have seen on this site. It has so much detail and you can really see that you are putting forth effort into the story... Although with those writing competitions and stuff that you keep winning with papers that only took a day to write, you might just be super talented and it comes easily to you :) Seriously though, your stories are fantastic and I can't wait for more (even though it looks like its been almost a year since your last update... but who is counting? -WE ARE :P- )

Moar.

He is hopeless though. In a funny kind of way.

Yaknow, they were being stupid. There is another confirmed way to leave. Beat Notch. That simple. And if the nations joined together, they would have an easier time of it. But alas, human nature does not allow that. I will be sorely disappointed if Jake doesn't dole out punishment of some sort for attacking mindlessly.

Hmmmmmmmmmm.

Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...

This seems oddly familiar. SAO much?

Sword art online

YEAAAAAA IT'S BACKKKKKK

I just realized the scene where he gets teleported into the game is just like how Sora and Shiro from No Game No Life got into the gaming world...

So did you actually watch No Game No Life?

And third, I've been reading A fool's conviction for over 6 times now, all chapters, so you better get out the next one or I'll go crazy.

Also Endergirl... I read it 4 times already...

SO YOU BETTER GET OUT THE NEXT CHAPTER!

Ok, this is honestly the best idea I've seen so far in some of the books I read. It kinda mixes The 100, Hunger Games, Sword Art Online(I think you got the inspiration from that because you typed that your fav anime is SAO) with the overall Minecraft experience.

Annnnnnndddddddd fiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinaaaaaaallllyyyyyyyy! Another chapter!
Although I'm honestly still rooting for Endergirl...

And If I don't see you posting chapters like last time (when you left for a LOOOOOOOOOONG TIME)
I swear, I will hunt you down.

Waiiiiiit, is there a group which is devoted to hunt you down? Because I would LOVE to join them. :D

*Keep the donuts rolling*

whatthefuck. no seriously. what the fuck, sam. glad to see you havent given up on this story and everything. but, what the fuck.

if i didn't have the feeling of a harem in the near future. i definitely have it now. i mean, i know you said this was going to be stronger than endergirl. but you didn't have to make eli a playa.

you practically plagiarized sword art online already, steve. did you really have to force a relationship between to people who only met yesterday. i mean seriously.

also great job so far, sally.

Hey Sylent! It's me Striker1298 aka SeriousBubbles aka the 01010011 01111001 01101100 01100101 01101110 01110100 00100000 01000100 01101111 01101111 01101101 00100000 01101001 01110011 00100000 01100001 00100000 01100010 01101111 01111001 00100000 01000001 01001000 01000101 01001101 . It's great to see you again. I love the entry into a chapter and everything seems to be going off to a great start-I immediately noticed a higher level of immersion, well done. What I notice with a lot of bestsellers is that they give the protagonist a sense of hopelessness... in a sense either they're trapped, or surrounded, or captured, but the main character always seems to go through a struggle that they cannot get by without the help of others. Setting Eli not as a lone wolf or as a one-man army but rather as a weak, flawed character that becomes dependent on his friends/others can really pull readers into your story. You made your character mention they have had, until this point, pretty much all "luck". Well, I believe you should show your readers that he was only "lucky". Although readers might not like it, it produces a tear in their heart, widens suspense, and opens a very profitable path of opportunity for character development (as in they're not perfect, perfect setup for Eli to train and get better). Also I was wondering if you could give me some feedback on my new story that I've been working on. It's called "Recurring Death" by SeriousBubbles, and it's on FictionPress (the non-fan fiction website of FanFiction). I would love if you could tell me your opinion. Unfortunately, I'm not getting many views because of a lack of category interest. Maybe if you err.. um... ya know... wanna like maybe ((((((((give a shoutout))))))))) to me so I can better my story, that'd be greatly appreciated. This is SerousBubbles, signing off. 010010010010011101101101001000000110000100100000011011000110100101110110011010010110111001100111001000000110100001110101011011010110000101101110001011000010000001100001011011100110010000100000011110010110111101110101001000000110000101110010011001010010000001110100011011110110111100101110001000000101011101100101001000000110000101110010011001010010000001100010011011110111010001101000001000000110110001101001011101100110100101101110011001110010000001101000011101010110110101100001011011100111001100101110001000000101010001101000011000010111010000100111011100110010000001101101011110010010000001110100011010010111000000100000011001100110111101110010001000000111010001101000011010010111001100100000011100100110010101110110011010010110010101110111001011100010000001010100011000010110101101100101001000000110001101100001011100100110010100100000010100110111100101101100011001010110111001110100001011000010000001110011011001010110010100100000011110010110000100100000011011110110111000100000011101000110100001100101001000000110100101110010011011110110111001111001001000000111001101101001011001000110010100101110

Well would you look at that. Seems I'm the first reviewer. ... This is... new... Well anyway time to reread chapter 6 so I know where we are. ... You know, I remember being all like "More detailed character descriptions plz", and I'm nooooot entirely sure where I stand on that anymore. Might've just been focused on the description I gave, vs the description you gave, Idk. Anyway, chapter 7! ...

Noooootttttch, NOOOOOOOTCH! ...

Ohhhhhh BOY have I forgotten a lot of people here. ...

So I see the shipping can officially start :p (jkjk) ... Actually on the note of shipping, I'm failing to remember if this one was gonna go somewhere in the same direction as Endergirl in terms of romance, ie. one sooooort of main girl with sortof-but-not-really other romance options. I remember you don't normally respond to AFC reviews for the sake of time, but that ain't gonna stop me writing :} ...

You know, Im actually fairly intrigued to see if any of the OCs join any specific factions when they inevitably form, and more so which ones. I must admit I do so want to see what happens to Adrian in that regard. Mwuehehehehehe. Don't kill him TOO soon now... I'm not asking you to kill him in the first place either, but I am kinda expecting it anyway, especially with the whole opening authors note for this chapter. Dis is gonna get bruuuuutal.

Unrelated note: Ever used your tablet for so much science research that it starts autocorrecting you those words during NORMAL conversations? Pretty awkward when your chatting in a game and go to type "casually" only to have it replaced with "sexually". It'd be even weirder if you were rping and it came up. "I sexually walk over to the man, and punch him in the face". Whoops. Thanks, Biology assignments. Now I have to clear my autocorrect.

Well, I think I've had enough fun writing about NOT the chapter, so lemme write something about it before I leave :p ...

I sayyyyyy...

It's time for someone to die :)

Bye now.

*sigh* The concept is cool, but there's just so little to like about the MC. He's honestly kind of annoyingly perfect so far

please make more

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