Looking forward to more chapters

what gonna happen next chapter?

wow.

More chapters please.

omg love this and hope you continue to update in the FINALLY a character that actually thinks to buy a melee weapon to defend i think an Ashikabi should invest in a shield they could use it to ride whatever blast is shot at them and gain some distance. Plus,if he fought someone like Tsukimi...Shield Surfing.

Add female Mutsu, Minato and Mikogami.

I see you're making Mitsu twins becoming Yamai twins from Date A Live.

Nice chapter. Nice read. Too bad you're going into another hiatus.

Huh, a "The World Ends with You" reference; you don't see those too often.
While the grammar may have been a bit shaky at times, it's nice that you're legitimately doing a different kind of story for this Sekirei story. Well, I'll see you again if and when you get your muse back.

i enjoyed it it was very funny

Wasn't that bad. I think you did a good job on it. Though the answer that Kazuki gave when he tried to explain they were their own person could have been better, but for a guy who is basically normal and knew little about them it works. Plus Sekirei are known to fall for their chosen Ashikabi pretty easily so that gives you more leeway. Also if you are wondering about how to make Mitsuki fight, then check Doflamingo from One Piece who also uses string to fight. Heck you can use his Awakening ability as her Norito. As for Mitsuha... not sure whips aren't a weapon I have much ideas on.

Hope Kazuki goes down the Tactician path since stories with the Ashikabi being OP especaily when its an OC, well since that is how most of them are it would be nice to read a story with a more normal Ashikabi. Look forward to the next chapter.

Also about Uzume, if Chiho can somehow be added that go for it, if not then keep them together since Chiho is too much of a sweet girl in my opinion to separate them. And while it might be a bit late to say hope one of the girls in the flock is Nanami since she look cute in my opinion.

i want karasuba in the flock

It's a good story so far! I Want ask is there any way he could wing Akitsu she's one of favorite characters! If not I understand.

Unreadable.

Every paragraph is a single, ongoing, long-running run-on sentence that doesn't end even when it should, and doesn't contain a single period.

You're missing boatloads of punctuation (again lots of periods and even question marks), and your dialogue is so hard to follow its almost impossible to tell who's speaking.

I was looking forward to reading this when I read the description. Imagine my disappointment when I found out that it was completely incomprehensible and couldn't be read at all.

In order to save this story and others in the same condition, you'll need to find a qualified proofreader and have them almost completely rewrite the story.

nanaya, like nananananananana- batman?

you so cool you should write more bravo have a cookie

Also wanting Kaiha as well.