The end was hilarious! Well If Vader does send that gift than they wont be surprised.

I love that Vader is that Dad who jokes around in any kind of situation like if you accidentally get caught shoplifting and you're in a detention cell and he'll go up right to your cell and starts asking how you like jail . it's not that bad right.? With a smile.

"Ruffle Anakin's hair affectionately but menacingly at the same time."

Lol! OMG I love this line like so much!

OMG It's QUI-GON JINN! I knew he wasn't dead. HELL YES

Oh, man. Vader is manipulating his young self so badly. I have a feeling that by the end of the story, the younger Anakin will not appreciate this very much.

I was totally fine with you saying that you knew very little about SW other than what's in the movies, but to learn that you read Wookieepedia for info is a bit frustrating considering how far off track you are with a main character, Maul. A couple other items, but the way Maul has been described throughout this story is so incredibly and grossly understated and misrepresented. I have enjoyed your story and have overlooked how you've demeaned his character because it is your story, which happens to be an AU-all the more reason not to care. But now you've said you actually do research using Wookieepedia, so please explain to me why you've done this? Where on earth did you ever even get the idea that Maul was taught very little in the Force? He was weak in the Force? And by all means, that he was not that great of a duelist, which is so far from anything ever said about Maul, especially on Wookieepedia. Even in the movie, he defeated one of the most venerated Jedi of the time. He and his padawan combined couldn't defeat Maul.

In addition to what I've said, Wookieepedia is like any other Wiki. It is editable by any Joe Blow. Sometimes incorrect edits are caught. Sometimes not.

HOWEVER - As an AU, I am thoroughly enjoying this story. I do not intend to bash the creativeness here nor the author as a writer.

Note to Author - I understand there may be discrepancies, and I came into this story with full awareness that it is an AU. In no way did I expect anything to be exact. However, the statement about reading Wookieepedia combined with how inaccurately you have portrayed Maul is a little much for me to leave alone only because other people might now assume what you've said is true about him. You write what you want. I like it a lot. I'm glad your story is here. I bash nothing about this story other than this one issue, and what I'm saying is directed more toward other readers than as a negative critique toward you or your story.

Vader’s armor was a prison. Not a master piece. It was designed to give Sidious an edge against Vader.

Umm I hate to burst your bubble, but Imperial Star Destroyers are vastly superior to their Republic predecessors. The Venator Class couldn’t compare to the Imperial Class especially the Class 2.

"not even Vader is so confident that he'd think he could control a clone army of force sensitives."

Star Wars: The Force Unleashed II would like to know your location.

Nice story. Really hoping that Anakin would be the next emperor or maybe Bells would be a match for Vader, but all well.

Qui-Gon is best man! He’s is coolest Jedi... mainly because of his nonchalance...

This is literally a masterpiece. The first time I had read this story, I had somewhat skimmed it. It had some good things that I caught here and there, but the length and main story points I wasn't as invested in.
After being halfway through the story, I realized that this was my second time reading it. And oh my gosh. To think I missed all of the amazing things this story has to offer the first time. The way you craft Vader, so be both likable and not. Giving the reader a choice as to whether they would agree with him or not. That, combined with serious themes and humor throughout is so hard to describe, it is just perfect.
I'm rambling a lot, but I just adore this story! It is truly amazing. :)

The level of hypocrisy in this chapter is staggering. Ani really have a selective memory. Vader has been extremely clear about his position with the Republic and the Jedi since the utter beginning. He has even warn him. In what way that makes him a betrayer ? It is beyond me. Ani is so easly manipulable that in some ways, I can't help but think he deserves what is going to come to him.

Some Sith have turned to the light side of the force and become Jedi not a lot and not often but it has happened apart from that good story.

Hahaha the romance in this story is hilarious at this point. This situation with Bellaxtrix and Padme scheming to matchmake is just too funny

You know the beginning was the best part of this fic but it in my eyes kinda fell apart as things progressed. Like how character development doesn’t really exist, we don’t see interactions and I mean real interactions. This cause everyone aside from anakin and Vader to feel unimportant. Also I feel you’ve been trying to over complicate the force, it’s complicated but simple you’ve been nothing but complicated with it.

Wait so did Vader execute the order or not? Cause if he did I personally don’t like the decision.

My only Aussie is in certain word choices like instead of galaxy you say world and other such similar word choices.