Reviews for Death Veil
ela931 chapter 4 . 10/28/2015
It's great! You know how to pick sb's interest. However, Amu should be able to do sth that can throw Ikuto from his ego's pillar - Amu should not be as helpless as she seems to be now. She is captured, yet she has no choice, but to obey the every command of mighty Prince. I strongly suggest that She should be left with some kind of weapon, not only with her sharp tongue. And why she instantly accepted being a Queen? Maybe some opportunity to escape from Ikuto's clutches will make him realize he should not take her for granted? Shortly speaking : now he holds too much power over her and she aside from the bitter remarks has got nothing to defend herself.
Anime-freak-otaku01 chapter 4 . 7/14/2015
Update quicker
moonprincess731 chapter 4 . 7/14/2015
Nice chapter and I get a better understanding of the story so keep on going because I wanna know what is going to happen next
Anime-freak-otaku01 chapter 3 . 6/12/2015
That was kind of scary but the end was really funny.
OceanaRose chapter 1 . 4/11/2015
I love it! Please update soon:)
Anime-freak-otaku01 chapter 1 . 4/10/2015
Continue the story
Jasmine chapter 1 . 4/10/2015
Please update soon its such a good story to start with can't wait for the next chapter!
amuto86 chapter 1 . 4/10/2015
I love, love, love ! please update soon.