Reviews for An Immortal Sage
Guest chapter 1 . 6/25
I don't get it. He is just 600 not 6000? But the Dragon war happened almost 4000 years ago so when the ninja alive they have witness a Dragon? I assume they are in the universe.
Lerris chapter 7 . 9/23/2019
This isn't a bad start, and it is good Mavis found a temporary cure. It would be interesting if this continued with changes affecting the normal story line.
Angelo47 chapter 7 . 8/20/2019
I would love to see more of this story, naruto x mavis story’s are a dime a dozen and this is a good one!
Guest chapter 7 . 2/6/2019
pls updatio
yudhazebba chapter 7 . 10/19/2018
Next
ErylJnx chapter 6 . 7/13/2018
plz updateddd
fenixrojo36 chapter 7 . 4/2/2018
Z
sharingankakashi007 chapter 7 . 12/1/2017
This is bloody brilliant
Soo curious about what happens next
Haha and hi5 Mavis killed me lol
Soo looking forward to them reaching Natsu's timeline
I'm reading this like the 7th time
Just as excited as the first time
Eagerly awaiting the next chapter
Old steamer chapter 7 . 10/17/2017
Hmm... Maybe you should think about using the dark magic building up in Mavis seal to fuel her transformation, after all if it is in her and having most of it's deadly energy spent from keeping her transformation going it likely won't kill someone and the remaining deadly energy could be put back into the seal not to mention this opens up an opportunity to have her age change in a slightly more permanent fashion, in the way that if she holds that transformation for a extended period of time, say a day or two her body will become what she transformed into with all her memory and higher thinking abilities fully intact if she turned into an animal on the other hand if she changed her age and appearance, it wouldn't take that long to finish maybe between less than six hours (if she doesn't change anything to drastic say her hair or skin colour) or less than eight hours (if she does) stopping the draw on her dark magic at all times allowing it to build up again. In short she's stuck like that until she transforms into something or someone else for a extended period of time again, while at the same time, langthaning the period of time the seal has before it must be emptied to keep it from rupturing due to dark magic overload as I would think that it would use quite a bit of of the dark magic to do that every time she transformed.
Loremaster Endsong chapter 1 . 9/26/2017
Love it
Guest chapter 1 . 4/24/2017
Its Zera not Zeira
Guest chapter 7 . 3/18/2017
You should update dude. It's a really good story and I want to keep reading it
Dzerx chapter 7 . 2/6/2017
Great story, really hoping you continue at some point.
Old steamer chapter 7 . 11/18/2016
Why don't you use the dark magic in the storage space for keeping the transformation active after all it could have very interesting side effects like making the transformed person permanently stuck at the age they're transformed into.
uzuuchi007 chapter 7 . 10/6/2016
Nice
202 | Page 1 2 3 4 11 .. Last Next »