Reviews for of clouds and foxes
Bubblezmith chapter 4 . 10/27/2019
Okay first short shorts stop at the hip and don't continue down the leg at all. Raman is a physicist, ramen is a noodle soup. The mid 'rift' is a lack of clothing between the bottom of the ribs and the waist. Other than that you show a lot of promise.
MaruOne chapter 4 . 2/4/2018
an OC? hmm interesting. why not anko? would love to see Shikmaru/Naru/Kiba with the snake clan
troublesomefox21 chapter 1 . 10/21/2016
oh my gosh I loved the first chapter. shukuku was hilarious I loved it
belladu57 chapter 4 . 8/27/2016
Very good
moonlight46 chapter 4 . 6/26/2016
Amazing story so far! Please continue!
Samiam2468 chapter 4 . 1/12/2016
WHAT OH NO NO NO NO NO.
GET BACK HERE RIGHT NOW AND FINISH THIS STORY BEFORE I FIND YOU AND KICK YOUR ASS.
YOU CAN NOT JUST LEAVE US LIKE THIS. ON THE EDGE.
IF I DID THAT WITH ANY OF MY STORY'S MY READER WOULD KILL ME SO GET BACK HERE. * Demon voice* NOW DAMN IT.* ominous clap of thunder and evil laugh.
Samiam2468 chapter 2 . 1/12/2016
Ohhhhhhhhhhhh
Tension
I love it.
Ravenclaw Slytherin chapter 4 . 11/6/2015
I like your story! Update soon!
cathyscloud9 chapter 4 . 6/22/2015
I like your story so far. I noticed a bit of issues with spelling and grammar but it doesn't take away from the story. Update soon!
TheBeauty chapter 4 . 6/22/2015
Awesome chapter :)
Blue-Rose-Princess chapter 3 . 6/17/2015
Update soon
Angel4EverLostInLife chapter 3 . 5/16/2015
More please! XD
belladu57 chapter 3 . 5/8/2015
Very good
idea.getthe chapter 3 . 4/29/2015
That was one very original paring...
TheBeauty chapter 3 . 4/29/2015
Wonder what will change now...
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