Reviews for Paralysed |
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Shadowgate chapter 14 . 5/5/2018 Oh yes Karen is just as caring as her brother. |
Vectigal chapter 14 . 5/5/2018 The idea is beautiful, pity about some misspelling and not. First of all, Ike is smaller in age than Karen. Secondly, why should Ike rape Karen? They are eleven years old! Third, why should Karen touch Kyle's penis? I repeat: she is only eleven ... Fourth, as mentioned the spelling mistakes are really too many but fortunately the fanfiction is enjoyable. |
Guest chapter 13 . 8/5/2017 Loving this fanfiction! Please continue |
ric122-inactive chapter 13 . 6/8/2017 Really cool |
Fillingtheemptyvoid09 chapter 8 . 12/11/2016 let's hope some "miracle" happens to kyle someday...haha.. |
X chapter 1 . 11/19/2016 I like the idea, but it's just badly written. The grammar, the spelling, just... everything really. Keep practising, you'll get there. |
Shadowgate chapter 8 . 11/17/2016 Wow Cartman has truly become a completely mean horrible asshole in his teen years. Oh and plus I hope the kids in South Park never start smoking. |
Guest chapter 8 . 11/14/2016 ok I know Cartman's an ass in the show but that's just a whole new kind of low even for him. Also I have a feeling that there's more to Kyle's depression then just him being paralyzed I mean if you're not even so much as cracking a smile when you're with friends there's something's wrong. Maybe you could have Rebecca come in sometime down the line to help cheer him up? |
Shadowgate chapter 7 . 11/9/2016 How sweet of them. |
Shadowgate chapter 6 . 11/9/2016 Goddamn it's been a long time. Oh how sad to see Kyle in this new condition. Drunk driving leads to chaos. |
Shadowgate chapter 5 . 10/23/2015 I think I'd rather get killed by an 18 wheeler than paralyzed. |
Shadowgate chapter 4 . 8/3/2015 Oh this is heartbreaking. Oh and I know Stan will be back soon. |
Shadowgate chapter 2 . 8/3/2015 This was a powerful chapter. |
komodor chapter 3 . 8/1/2015 well its not bad but its just too short. its not that hard to make the important part longer |
Shadowgate chapter 3 . 6/14/2015 This was quite alright. Yummy! |