Ugh, not sure if I'm hoping to like this or not. The story is written well enough, though it hasn't really grabbed me yet. My issues are more with the characters. First and foremost is that I dislike sasuke quite a bit. Everything about his character grinds me. I just wanna punch that little prick in the face. Next is Hinata who only really becomes interesting later on. She's cute and all but I've written her in my stories before and the stutter kills me. What I'm really only concerned about is and potential romance there. HinataXNaruto doesn't work for me. Not only is it too vanilla and bland, but I just thunk he needs a stronger, more self confident woman.

The curse seal can’t affect someone with a Boku in them so I’m kinda confused about this chapter.?

Just hope the "Namikaze Shizune" was a typo! I just hate it when authors goes and change original characters names and identities! With the exception of the "Senju Naruto" here as it is more like an adopted name! I prefer more when the story change because fate/destiny(Authors) made slight change leading to a completely new story!

For example in cannon... Let's assume that the 2 ninjas who almost killed Naruto really existed! Let's say they were making their way in the direction of Naruto but spotted Itachi with blood on him before seeing Naruto! It made them alerted, they then chased him while alerting other shinobis thus leaving Naruto to be found later then sent to the hospital then going on with the original story!

Now for this story however, a slight change made fate/destiny(Authors) resulting in Itachi being a little more overwhelm by the massacre he just did resulting in him being a little more late when moving in the direction of Naruto leading to the 2 ninjas to have just enough time to see and almost kill Naruto with Itachi interferring before that could happen thus leading to the story we are reading now!

Well, anyway, just ranting here, don't mind, LOL, these are the kind of things i like in fanfictions! But it's just me! THANKS

Orochimaru is a pedophile... Orochi-pedo... Hah..

a are you going to continue it

This was a fun read can you upload more please? (Is this discontinued?)

I'm sorry its just I don't like binary as a character or her development in the story, however I love you story in general and all of the plot that goes with it.

Oh my God plausible Elemental being in Naruto! Hah he's a fire bender! Sweet

Dropped after this
I could read a retarded Naruto, even a retarded Naruto who can’t fight but not a retarded Naruto who doesn’t even try to learn how to fight and wtf is wrong with you and that random Orochimaru encounter any half assed naruto reader/viewer would know that this is simply unbelieveable to the point I genuienly believed it to be a genjutsu all the way through chapter just waiting for it to be revealed

good stuff

This story is too overly dramatized in awkward places for my writing other than that, though.

Naruto himself called Sasuke the last Uchiha, and himself the last Senju. . . Then later in the chapter he just learns Sasuke is the last?

Really? He shouted his healing jutsu?
This isn't one of THOSE stories where the stealthy assassin ninjas shout at the top of their lungs and give away their position, is it? :c

Genial historia y muy interesante.

Type your review pathetic and useless naruto a puppet