Good to see the young bloods find their peace for once.

Update already

please update

What happens next .

P.S. Luna and Lex should get pregnant at the same time.

Thanks for adding more description and interaction. The story just keeps getting better and better. U haven't done it but please stary away from a Mary Sue land.
Write more soon.

Yeah! I am glad u have more faves, followers and finally reviewers. Love the increased interaction between yautja and humans. Thanks for putting more details in ur story. Like to know what are the characters thinking. Anw as u can see the other reviewer agree with me. I wish u would slow down ur chapter a bit. Well.. I don' t mean slow update. I mean like how the story flow. So u can include more details which is now ok just want them to be the best:).

I love your story
Please update more

I love it but can you make te chapters longer with more detail and less rush

The chapter is keep getting better. Still please add more details and realistic reaction to perfect it. Please write more soon.

Nice chapter. The chapter is less rushed. I want to know what will happen next Because the storyline will no longer be adapted from the movie. Please write more soon.
to whom reading, please review. I agree with the author, whether like or dislike, please let the author know.

Good job. But it would be better if u added more details and took time to describe things. I feel this chaper was a little rushed and sometimes confusing. I like the tone of the first chapter . Other than that it is good. Please write more soon but please take ur time to brush up the chapter.
To whom reading my review to decide whether to read the story , please read. The charater had not been Mary Sue and the plot is uniquely adapted from AVP.

Guess I am the first one who review and I come to like ur story. These two chapters are really good. I like the mysterious tone of the story. However the reason I had not read ur story before because of the summary.
My thought was like she was going to be another Mary Sue because of her superpower. Another thing when comes to mysterious story like this, the author often abandon them after a few chapters. Don't know why. Maybe because they are dificult to write. Hope u won' t do either of them. Anw pleasw write more soon. If u can update often , maybe u can get more followers.