It says something that I felt actual, physical pain after reading this. You are such a talented author.

This made me cry. Thank you for writing this.

Ouch.

This hit me right in the feels. The image of Pikachu crying over Ash for the first time in a decade...well, I didn't expect that. This was extremely well written.

Wonder what Pikachu will do now...

You just know how to blatantly combine tragedy and hope so well. All the adventure’s that could have been are the episodes that we grew up with. And the story ends, just like it begins, with a boy and his Pokémon.

This is so depressing...

Interesting concept, and this fanfic is good, but seriously, even if I knew beforehand that it was gonna be a Tragedy, I was not prepared for this.

This... this made me cry...

I have to admit, I went into this knowing it was tragedy and knowing it would be nothing but somber and awful so I was kinda prepared, but it still managed to catch me off guard and get me all choked up. I know I just said this was awful but it was the good kind of awful, you know? The kind of awful you have to feel sometimes. I like, just watched this episode again too, so I could hear that stupid (actually really compelling and great), dramatic music playing in my head as Pikachu relived the Spearow attack. I would go back up and use the Japanese names to keep the fluidity but I don't want to find them or try to spell them, I would just embarrass myself. Anyway, this was really sweet and terrible and as much as I hate stories where Pikachu or Ash dies and the other loses it, this was an exception. Have a nice night and keep up the good work 3

My word, this is so depressing, and yet so realistic at the same time. I imagine Pikachu didn't live much longer either, because of all the regrets he had.

this...touched my and ash are the bestest of pals.

Damn that was depressing. You did really well with this, thank you...

Ouch, my feels... It hurts to hold them back...

*sobbing*

God damn despite this being so short it really did touch my heart.

I have to admit the Pokemon Coma Theory is portrayed wonderfully here, and a part of me screams that there should be a happy ending, that Ash has to wake up somehow having experienced his adventures.

But in the end this story hurts and touches my heart because of it's realism and the fact that it confronts mature topics in the same way the real world does.

In the end all we can hope is that Pikachu can still find his redemption one day.

why are you so good making story like this! why the hell am I torturing myself by reading this!
I really have some guts reading all of your tragic story of pokemon, even though I'm gonna cry again! You're my favorite author you know.

Heartbreaking