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Guest chapter 2 . 6/25/2017 Hey, its a good story, bur seeing how it took you two years to write the second chapter i think that you should reread the first one. In the first one you say he waited for 2 and half uyears bdfore moving, here you say he left 5 years ago and Ana is 5, or that his parents bearly saw her. I dont mean any harm or hate, just that you should reread the first chater and change either to match the other. But great work! |
Ross's Juliet chapter 2 . 6/25/2017 Great chapter can't wait for more update soon. |
strikerhaos chapter 1 . 9/10/2016 Update please |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/30/2015 Please write more this is great! |
Lucy9367 chapter 1 . 8/20/2015 Could u please update this story :D |
Naomi's Dragons chapter 1 . 5/18/2015 Please update soon! |
cgv101 chapter 1 . 4/22/2015 OMG please UPDATE SOON! |
XxXxXAustinxAllyXxXxX chapter 1 . 4/20/2015 This is an awesome idea! Update! I can't wait for the next chapter! |
Ross's Juliet chapter 1 . 4/20/2015 Sounds really good can't wait for more update soon. |
MusicWithinMe chapter 1 . 4/20/2015 so sad! sounds like a really good story! PLZ update fast! |
miri324 chapter 1 . 4/19/2015 heey this is really good! pliss continue :D |