Reviews for Forgotten
Guest chapter 2 . 6/25/2017
Hey, its a good story, bur seeing how it took you two years to write the second chapter i think that you should reread the first one.
In the first one you say he waited for 2 and half uyears bdfore moving, here you say he left 5 years ago and Ana is 5, or that his parents bearly saw her. I dont mean any harm or hate, just that you should reread the first chater and change either to match the other.
But great work!
Ross's Juliet chapter 2 . 6/25/2017
Great chapter can't wait for more update soon.
strikerhaos chapter 1 . 9/10/2016
Update please
Guest chapter 1 . 10/30/2015
Please write more this is great!
Lucy9367 chapter 1 . 8/20/2015
Could u please update this story :D
Naomi's Dragons chapter 1 . 5/18/2015
Please update soon!
cgv101 chapter 1 . 4/22/2015
OMG please UPDATE SOON!
XxXxXAustinxAllyXxXxX chapter 1 . 4/20/2015
This is an awesome idea! Update! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Ross's Juliet chapter 1 . 4/20/2015
Sounds really good can't wait for more update soon.
MusicWithinMe chapter 1 . 4/20/2015
so sad!
sounds like a really good story!
PLZ update fast!
miri324 chapter 1 . 4/19/2015
heey this is really good! pliss continue :D