Hey just wanted to say I dropped by and read the whole thing in like a couple of days. It is an amazing story and I can't wait to read the next part. Hope you're doing well.

OMG I can't wait for the next chapter.

Great story, storyline, and duologue this is a jewel of a story

Okay, absolutely loving your fic so far and have had no complaints at all in anything you've writen. But I immediately saw an error, in the beginning of the chapter, Mehta was in a carriage recently, with the altromora party that she snuck into. Normally I wouldn't jump the gun in letting you know, especially with a small mistake like that, but I literally couldn't read past it without rereading it to see if it was right or wrong lol. Like I said I'm absolutely loving your fic so far and everything is so wonderfully blended together! I love seeing glimpses of Miirak and I can't wait to see if you start merging dawngaurd together when Aluidin is taken care of. Love the fic and can't wait to read more!

Arrrrg! The build up is getting to me! You keep hyping up the dragon capture mission so much, and your upload rate is just regular enough to keep me tense with anticipation.

Love the interaction with Mehra still. That moment when Erich and Neloth both were like: “Ya, you’re brooding again” was good :)

Keep it up.

Thanks for the chapter. That was awesome.

"She survived a dragon attack yesterday, brother." Yesterday? By this point it's probably a week later. It took two days to get to Falkreath, then two more to get to Riverwood, then some number of days to get to Whiterun.

Also... chapter 1 made this seem like it might be a different story. Going to Falkreath, basically telling the plot to take a hike. I was looking forward to something unique, an exploration of a mage from a prior age wandering Skyrim outside of the game storyline, whether or not she's the dragonborn. And now this is firmly back on the rails. Go to Riverwood, talk with the smith, go to Whiterun, talk with the Jarl, talk with the wizard, head to Bleak Falls. BORING! I've played the game. Multiple times. I don't want to read someone else's embellished walkthrough. This even has direct word-for-word conversations copied from the game. So much for unique.

That Star Wars fic is written by Illuviar by the way. Great handling of the negotiations by the way. Not even an Erich name drop needed to convince them. Great job!

This is a very good story. One of the best on the Internet! Keep it up. If u like Star Wars try the story: Rogue Knight. It’s an interesting story about if u add a Sith Lord from the old republic timeline in the early clone wars. He also happens to have quite a bit of future knowledge and he uses it to drive the clone wars into a real galactic conflict. It’s got over 400k for the first part and some for the second part. Anyway love the story and all the morrowind references. Stay cool!

Correction of my previous review:
The author PM:d me about my review regarding the spelling of Erich last name and it turns out that I was wrong. Bethesda actually uses four different spellings for the month: Hearthfire, Heartfire, Hearth fire and Heart fire with all of them seeming to be correct.

Uesp has a mention of this on their Lore:Calendar page which I had to read before being able to accept this :-)

Just re-read the latest chapter and noticed something I'd managed to miss before. Erich's last name is spelled 'Heartfire' instead of 'Hearthfire'. I went back and ctrf:ed 'Heartfire' for a few chapters and the spelling seems to consistently be 'Heartfire'. Is this intentional? I was sure I read somewhere in another chapter that his last name was the same as the month. Couldn't find the chapter mentioning it now though so it just be in my head...

Also: Thanks for the chapter!

Nice chapter! I wonder when Erich will wake up? Is it a daedric plot? Will ohdaviing eat mehra? Coming up next in to dust: ch 48

Just finished binge-reading all of this and I didn't even notice that the sun went down! It's been a while since I've been so hooked to a story.

Man, this is another one of those stories for me. You know, one of those fics you started reading years ago. It’s pretty dang amazing and has lots of long chapters but updates at a pace slower than molasses.

Fortunately, this just makes every rare chapter all the more satisfying when it comes out.

About the story. I feel like Tamriel would kind of explode if Mehra’s identity as the Nerevarine/Dovahkiin got out after Alduin. Because in most cases the capital H Heroes are known for a single event or crisis. Here though, Mehra is quite literally a Big Damn Hero x 2.

The rep she’d have would be like if you combined Napoleon and George Washington into one individual.

Other than that I’m still loving the story, and Mehra is awesome!

Thanks for the chapter