toda la razón :( ,escribe mas de esta pareja por favor

OH MY GOODDD! I've never been a fan of Byakarin ever,but dude, i have to give to you! That was an amazing one shot! Keep up the good work!

ah.. fanfcition

A never knew a ByaKarin ship was around but now I fully support it thanks to you. I did think Byakuya was a bit OOC at the end. You should fix that.

This is my first time reading a ByaKarin fic and to be honest, the pairing has never crossed my mind before. I must say that this was AWESOME. And it made me laugh so much. I can totally see them together after reading this fic. :D :D :D

Oh that was over quick! If you write more I'd totally read it

Short, simple, detailed but not overly so. A good little piece of fiction.

This is so cute! I love ByaKarin but there aren't a lot so when I see a new fanfic I get so excited. I'd love to see how the rest plays out if you're willing to make this oneshot a story.

love byakarin

Gosh this is cute and so well-written! I'm in awe. The real gem of it all is the dialogue, which is snappy and witty and delicious. The line about the universe shattering into pieces for example. A real treat and I enjoyed it very much! You're an amazing writer!

This is so sweet so far, I'm not really a fan of romance, but this is just too damn cute. Keep it up! 3

I liked the story. It would be really interesting to see what happens afterwards. I say the story should continue.

ooo interesting introduction, although still the HK, BK also interests me, especially when their interaction becomes interesting ... well seguire here, so mood ! ;)