I love this story! please continue!

I love it! I really hope Alfred sees someone for his problems, because this isn't natural for Mr. United Hero

please make more and make it were arthur finds that blade soon! make it were arthur does his bed sheets for him to be nice since hes been having a ruff time and he finds the blade, or somthing like that.

Cannot wait for more!

Interesting! Like where its going! Please update soon!

I'm sorry you're speaking from personal experience-I definitely wouldn't say that what was mention in the first chapter or summary is a very enjoyable experience. Anyways, a good first chapter! I like your writing. I think you did a really good job with description. Thanks for writing!