| Reviews for Cardin and the Snail Girl |
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   dracohalo117 chapter 17 . 2/8/2016 Not bad, though, admittedly I would have liked to have seen a flashback of when Cail was chosen to be team leader, and how her team responded. dracohalo117 |
| dracohalo117 chapter 16 . 2/1/2016 I am wondering, does Weiss or Winter have a connection with Casey...and if B isn't her name, what is? Looking forward to the next chapter. dracohalo117 |
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/29/2016 Pretty enjoyable. I've never seen an OCxCardin story so far and I just stumbled upon this when I was scanning the RWBY library for anything that looks eh. Honestly, I like Cail for her teasing and kinda of a bad girl. (lol I said it) Writing format is readable. Looks like the same as any decent story should have which I just wanted to let you know. Overall, I enjoyed this chapter and I've just started so I'm gonna keep on going. Gets kissed by faunus girl, calls her a bitch. (- This should seriously be a meme or something.) |
| AkiraTKGW chapter 1 . 1/25/2016 -shivers with excitement- Please I want to see this story update! -puppy eyes- PLEASE! |
| Words and letters chapter 15 . 12/4/2015 Caught up, now I want more. Much like your other chapters this one is well written and very entertaining, keep up the good work. |
| dracohalo117 chapter 15 . 12/1/2015 Well then, this was interesting, very interesting. Keep up the good work. dracohalo117 |
| dracohalo117 chapter 14 . 11/21/2015 Not quite what I expected, but this was still very good. Keep up the good work. dracohalo117 |
| dracohalo117 chapter 13 . 11/9/2015 Well, seems Cail is in some deep trouble now. dracohalo117 |
| dracohalo117 chapter 12 . 10/15/2015 Nice chapter. Keep up the good work. dracohalo117 |
| workeranomalie chapter 10 . 8/15/2015 Yay finally someone who get a step ahead of Cinder! GO CAIL! its wierd how in most fan fic's Cinder is an untouchable super Villain who knows everything... |
| dracohalo117 chapter 10 . 7/29/2015 Oh Cail, you just pissed off the flame witch... dracohalo117 |
| workeranomalie chapter 9 . 7/24/2015 whoah for a side story this is really good. I've read the main story too but this one is far more interesting for me. Well i like both storys but not really into this Robot Human relationship thing. well i'll follow you so keep up the great work and thank you for Writing! |
| dracohalo117 chapter 9 . 7/13/2015 Good chapter, keep up the good work... |
| AkiraTKGW chapter 2 . 7/13/2015 Hehe Cail so cute XD Still can't imagine her leaving a trail of slime behind... |
| dracohalo117 chapter 8 . 6/29/2015 Interesting chapter, spelling errors, but it was alright...so, Cail became a masochist because her family hated her, and she was so used to their hatred, that when she felt them gain joy from hurting her, it was a dream come true, she made them feel happy for once, and that affected her...wow... dracohalo117 |
