I really like this book and I am very excited for more updates to come! Although I spotted a few errors it's nothing a little revision won't fix! Keep up the awesome work and have an awesome day!

Yukino and her spirits are cool but since she is not Lucy not many care about her even though Lucy found her keys mostly due to luck and because she is a main character.

So, where *is* Earthland Lucy? Inside the Lacrima? If so, I suppose it'd make sense since she wasn't even a Dragon Slayer to begin with. Like, wtf..how is she the *only* Non-Dragon Slayer who *wasn't* absorbed into the Lacrima? That should be a Dragon Slayer and Exceed Only , good chap. Scary Lucy Best Lucy. At least she has more character than whatever the fuck Earthland Luigi is.

..why can't Laxi just choose her Exceed as her partner like Natsu? Warren would help a lot though, on the island, with his telepathy. And wow..a Laki that's into Gray? Ew. You could've also just made her a lesbian which would've been funnier imo. E. Laki and E. Canna/Levy? XD
Meh. Anyway, that was pretty funny. Good chap.

Ja Ne~!

Second time this has happened. You wrote "Dryaid" when it's supposed to be "Dryad."
Also, I fucking hate that crazy bitch Daphne. The Dragonoid is a cool idea, but she's fucking crazy and ridiculous. Also, Juvia just makes me want to kill her because of how she acts. LIKE FUCK OFF LADY! YOU DON'T HAVE ANY MOTHERFUCKING RIVALS! LEAVE PEOPLE BE FOR FUCK SAKE'S YOU FUCKING INFERIORITY COMPLEX BITCH! Like Jesus Christ, she makes me want to smash my head into an oven that's cooking at 360 or into a brick wall. She was cool until she fucking became a motherfucking goddamned glorified stalker with an inferiority complex. Like oh my fucking god I hate her the most in Fairy Tail. Even Ichiya and Sho are better than her.
Anyways..good chapter. Sorry for the rant, but God damn Juvia makes me so angry.
And I extremely hated how Laki pulled that 'joke' about dating Gray to make Natsu mad as well as Erza saying he shouldn't be in Fairy Tail if he can't even protect his girl. You just *don't* say that to your boyfriend/friend. That's just very very very god damned fucking wrong. I've always hated this arc, and I hardly hate anything. That's just my opinion though. Nice work though. Again, sorry for the rant. I could go on and on, but I figured it was long enough. xP

..Holy shit! Unison Raid: Charcoal Dragon?! GOD DAMN! THAT'S AWESOME!
Though, Y'know what would be a funny mode between Laki and Natsu? "Firewood Dragon Mode." XDD
Anyways, good chapter! x3

Ja Ne~!

You couldn't tell what gender he was into he started talking? I thought it was obvious he was male since the start? :Thinkingpose:

..fucking FINALLY! They're finally together! It's like Lisanna was the only one he could tell who loved him without her having to kiss him. That's what I think, anyway. Anyways, BONZAIIIIII! :D

..Poisoned Sky Dragon? Never heard of it or even seen it on this site. But Poisoned Wood Dragon Mode sounds awesome! Hmm..Poisoned Fire... And wow, was it a tie between Cobra and Laki? Or did Cobra actually win?

Also..got a little error here;
"Behold, Salamander." - Brain, i think you mean Cobra, not Salamander.

"Erik dropped to his knees and lowered his head" ...wot? I think you mean Natsu, Author-san.
"That's not Lisanna." - Hibiki, I think you mean Gray, Author-san.
"Can't you just incapacitate her so we can move on to Nirvana?" - Carla, I think you mean "him."
"so that means I'm her only one who can close his Gate." I think you mean "I'm the only one"
And typos here; "lik" "depfeat"

Wow, lots of errors this chapter. Did you copy paste from the other story? Anyways, that's all I could find.

Ja Ne~!

Woah woah woah, what?! Lyon went out in an explosion?! I wonder how the future will play out if he's dead. Even though I don't remember if this happened in the show, I'm gonna think he's still alive somehow because of the rule 'if we don't see a body, the guy ain't dead.' So, let's see if he encased himself in ice before the explosion in the next chapter. Hmm.

Ah, so this is where her Exceed was.
Also, am I the only one who wonders if Hoteye can be called the Kool-aid man with all his "Oh yeah!"s? Lol. And, why do you have One Piece if I may ask? Is it cuz every woman has ridiculous melon-sized bazongas? Or cuz the MC is retarded? Or is it something else?

Nymph and Nymphomaniac are different. Look it up. The only relation either word has is the first 5 letters. So I can't see why u see it as nymphomaniac. If it was Nympho, that'd be different. Anyways, I hope Natsu and Laki get together in the next few chapters if Ch40's title is anything to go by.

Ja Ne~!

I wonder what Laki was talking about. What did Natsu say? Was it the part where he didn't want to risk Laki and thus risks Erza instead? Hm...
And again, I apologize for outburst before. Now that I've calmed down, I think you made the right decision, story-wise. Though, I'd have thought she'd be freaking out more that Natsu would've hanged himself if she died like Lisanna 'did' as well. Anyways, on to the next chapter!

..y'know, I was expecting her to finally confess to Natsu this chapter because..oh, I don't know..SAW HIM HANG HIMSELF IN A VERY POSSIBLE FUTURE?! Like come on! Who needs more incentive than that!? Why is she still acting like a pussy about her feelings for him!? *Bangs head against a brick wall 5 dozen times*
Like omfg! This is ridiculous! What chapter does she finally confess to Natsu in where he *doesn't* act like an oblivious retard?! I'm sorry if I sound like an asshole right now, but I'm kinda pissed off since it doesn't make the slightest sense. When she woke up, she should've finally and FIRMLY decided to tell him when he woke up! I'm still gonna read, cuz it's cool, but this is starting to unbearably get on my nerves now...
*Takes deep breath*
Though, I'm glad she'll be keeping the glasses, even if they don't have the lenses I guess. She looks cuter with actual glasses, but eh. Least you took the middle ground rather than the infamous High Ground. I apologize for my angry rant, but I hope you understand where I'm coming from.

Ja Ne~!