Reviews for Undertones
Lilycat76 chapter 5 . 7/19
They certainly spend a lot of their time trying to get under each other’s skin. Must be like young boys pulling the girls hair because they like them, lol
Lilycat76 chapter 4 . 7/18
Nice! So much character development in this chapter. Not just in the control of their shinsei sainou, but also in the development of their relationship.
Lilycat76 chapter 3 . 7/17
Wow! I definitely like your version of Toushiro! He has to have guts to talk back to Byakuya; that was great!
Lilycat76 chapter 2 . 7/16
Oh my. Very intense. Lots of emotion being drawn out of them both, even if it’s unknown, or unacknowledged at this point. And Renji’s and Rangiku’s reactions were the icing on the cake.
Lilycat76 chapter 1 . 7/15
Am so happy I got to read this! You nailed both characters perfectly! And the hollow showing Rukia her possible future... an excellent beginning! Can’t wait to keep reading!
Dreaming Haven chapter 19 . 7/1
Great story! I loved it! It was cool how Byakuya told them about Yuki, neither of them ever had that vision.:) I look forward to the next Rukia/Toushiro story!
Future nuke tech chapter 13 . 6/24
Ice melting is still a physical reaction; you are simply applying enough energy for the molecules to shift into the liquid state. A chemical reaction is something like cooking food, or sodium and chloride coming together to make salt, or mercury phosphate (which is actually a solid, oftentimes found in rock) separating to make mercury as we normally know it.
Besides from the one, small nitpick, I’m loving your story so far!
Erdrick the great chapter 7 . 6/12
Aww poor Tosh is jealous that Ichigo made her laugh. Don't worry whitey. That strawberrys got nothin on you XD.
Xiyou-Chan chapter 19 . 6/8
I don't know if I should be crying or not? This ending is somewhat like the ending of Fairy tail!

Belated congratulation dear!
Poncianna chapter 1 . 6/4
Please give us more of this awesome story XD
Bibliophile Anya chapter 19 . 6/4
I cannot believe this fic has ended! It has been a great ride! This fic used to be my most re read fanfic when I was thick in the Bleach fandom and even after that each chapter was eagerly awaited! Thank you for your hardwork! I adored the relationship and characters you have portrayed.
I loved how you captured Ichigo and Rukia's relationship and the intense bond of of Toushiro and Rukia. Also you handled Momo tastefully as apposed to many fanfics.
I loved the concept of flashbacks and their ice natures. Bravo!
Hope you write more amazing fanfics like this and all the best to you even in real life!

Kudos

-Anya.
ramblingninny chapter 19 . 6/4
Thank you. Its been a beautiful journey ️️️
sleeplygirl chapter 19 . 6/3
I follow your story when it first came out ,how time flies ! It’s been such a long time and I’m glad that I stick around for it . Thank you for writing and finishing Undertones!
Anon chapter 19 . 6/3
It’s a bit bittersweet. I’m happy it ended, I’m sad it ended
JJ chapter 18 . 6/2
Absolutely amazing! Thank you for coming back to finish it!
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