What are you talking about?! You DID NOT ruin anyone! It's a great first chapter! :) :D

Vegeta was really a bastard (literally and figuratively). Even though this is a fanfic, its based off Dragon Ball Minus, and I see that Raditz really did care for Kakarrot. All the time he spent with Vegeta and Nappa, and then he shows up in the beginning of Z ready to murder his nephew. I hope you're proud, you royal prick

Is somebody chopping onions? Everyone knows when they chop onions my eyes get all weepy, right?

Awww, so sad and a like the deepness of it. I always wondered who and what happened to Vegdta's mother. I always figured she died when he was very young, maybe when he was a baby even.. Well, wonderful story so far!

That part was Frieza was a bit intense. Didn't think he would actually go to Planet Vegeta o.o

Omg, this was so cute! Gine may not be a fighter, but she was so awesome! I love how you included Bardock's crew. My headcanon is that he had his original crew, but something must have happened to them, so he got that new partner we see in Minus. And after sending Kakarot off and saying goodbye to Gine, he goes confront Frieza. Or something along those lines anyway.

Even with a sad ending, you can't help but feel happy knowing there was closure.
Great Story.

Aw im glad Gine was able to see the vision of the future so she can see her son grow up. it was a good ending and a good read.

WAAAAHHH! Its so beautiful!

Drabble or not, it really has a touching moment to it all.

I just noticed the email update. I'm glad that Bardock was able to see his son and he made a intelligent plan. I don't want this story to be over with, I love it.

aw that was so sweet what the doctor did. this chapter was great and it sucks that bardock just missed the birth of his son.

Why do bad things have to happen to good people? Sweet as this moment is, we all know what it is a prelude to.

It's never easy growing up.

I loved this chapter! I think this one has to be my favorite so far!