I loved this story! You have written it so beautifully, I have one question though, (Don’t have to answer) who do you think would voice Star Ruby and Aquamarine?

Spinel.
And Ruby?
NO!

Me and my girlfriend love SU i fell in love with this story infact id take this over the real story Garnet told steven any day. Well i lack future vision i find that i am the sapphire of my relationship and i dont even know how to tell my little ruby how strongly i feel for her. I suppose the garnet wedding ring i have my eye on (no pun intended ) will work. your story brought a tear to my eye both of spinals death and the end. your a wonderful author i hope you continue to write and one day i hope you can make your own books as i would love to read those as well keep up the great work

I sincerely love how you write, and Iwould be glad of speaking with you one night.

Hello. I'm sorry for not reviewing sooner, however I couldn't bring myself to stop reading long enough to express how much I loved this story. I found your writing to be an utter delight. You perfectly found a way to get me personally as a reader attached t a character; then when the time came(i.e Spindel) to write off a character in just a few paragraphs I felt as though I too had grieved for them and was accepting that they were the imagination the story's quality made it seem as though I was viewing a one of a kind film. To the eyes it was pleasing to read through. Whether the chapters were short or long I was able to read through the simple straight to the point yet descriptive text without growing bored and skipping past anyone part that came off as a rant. I feel I'm rambling,just I wish for you to know how this story has made its way into heart. So to simply put it. Thank you for sharing your beautiful story. It was an experience I was more than happy to be a part of.

Ok little kids, you see the rating? It says "M". You know what that means!? If course you don't since your stupid enough to have read the story in the first place. If the author wants to swear like fricka frackin Deadpool it's none of yoir business because THIS IS NOT RATED FOR KIDS. God, this is the type of story I'd read at 11 and ya'll are whining about swears. Like, Kentucky fried jesus if you can't handle the heat GET OUT OF THE KITCHEN

You whole really see the episode "The answor"

Your story is GREAT! I like every part of it. Keep up the good work! But seriously, can you like stop the swear or curse words? Its bad for me cuz yeah, im 11 but literally, your story was great and amazing. :)

Its ok unlike the first chapter. But like the first, pls check your spelling. I forgot to point that out. But good job. (I dont like the bad words though)

I like the start. Its pretty much almost what I thought how probably "The Answer" could have started. Good job even if its only the start.

I LOVED THIS made me laugh,cry and both at the same that sneek peek,AHHHH

This took a really hopeful turn towards the end despite a bittersweet overall tone. I enjoyed the story from beginning to end; you really flesh out the backstory well and make what I feel are very believable characters, with a unique twist of your own. Very well done!

The backstory being spun here is so rich...I love it. Well done with weaving Garnet into this narrative. And I like how she essentially became a legend in the "Dirty East."

I really enjoyed this chapter thoroughly. Another great blending of fanon and canon, especially with the origin at the ending. Love the description you put together of that final, stable fusion. Very well done!

A lot of brutal events in this one! Seeing Sapphire do that was quite chilling, but in the end it was quite fascinating to see Emerald get embarrassed...well, owned really.