get the next chapter going already!

Another!

AHhh update! It’s been four years! Update!
Pretty please with a cherry on top!

Ummmm light furys are not night furys

Nice story. Is it still going on, or is it broken off?

It says that updates will be out more often yet it has been almost 2 years since the last update that is kind of ridiculous

You should totally finish this story, if not I would be willing to adopt it.

I hope this gets updated soon

Please update!

that's nice of him, giving that neither of the rookies can walk well yet

So glad you are continuing this story! Looking forward to seeing how Hiccup and Astrid adjust to their new life.

Hmm. The only question I have is how will Toothless be able to fly again? His prosthetic can't be used by Hiccup or Astrid anymore.

The first transformation fic that I read was "Lightning and Death Itself." That got me hooked and I started looking for more. That is how I came across yours. Given that you only have two chapters up I'll hold off on any critiques.

There are only so many ways to start this type, and the usual one used is that Toothless (or some other dragon) changes them. Funny thing is, almost everyone chooses the "purple flame" as the means of transformation. ;)

You have raised a serious set of questions for me, and I can't wait to see how you answer them. I won't ask them here, as I feel that it's better to not have you feel pressured by your readers expectations.

G'luck, take care, be safe. And we'll see you when you return.

Alles lief perfekt, bis Toothless brachten sie in das Nest. Ein Teil der Astrid sollte wissen, es war zu schön um wahr zu sein, dass es nicht von Dauer sein würde. Aber die Dinge waren nie leicht für einen Hofferson. Wer wusste schon, wie so ein unschuldiges Flug ändern könnte ihnen lebt ... Drachen! Hiccup! Drachen! Astrid! R & R Neu Tag Chapters: 3-43-5

Greetings Silver Blue Eyed Wolf.

I received your PM m8, and I'm honored that you've personally asked me to leave a review for one of your stories. Really, this is the first time an author has asked this of me. Though honestly, when I look at them, my reviews aren't as really great and constructive as you say. Not being modest or boastful or anything, but meh. But thanks for thinking my reviews are so! So anyways, in response to your request, here it is (obviously...). Lol. Hope this review is helpful enough for you. :D

Alrighty. Lets get on with things shall we?
So what came into my mind after reading everything so far was: you were inspired to write this weren't you? Hahaha. Oh, I'm not implying that you're just copying someone else's idea btw. But I just remembered you're also following El Limefred's story "Fall from Grace", so I'm guessing that's what inspired you to write this. If not, then sorry! No offense meant. :D

Anyways, I must say that this story sparked my interest once I saw the summary, even more so once I actually read this. So far I've read only two Transformation fics in my time here in this fandom; the 1st being Cke1st "Lightning and Death Itself", then the 2nd being "Fall from Grace" by El Limefred. So honestly, even though the plot of this story is hardly an original idea, it's still unique in its own way.

So what's happened so far was that after the "romantic flight", Hiccup, Astrid and Toothless are at the Red Death's lair, then the Queen does something to both Hiccup and Astrid that makes them turn into dragons? Hmmm... that surprised me to say the least. Though to be perfectly honest, I think you did a good job portraying the that part, and also the transformation process of Hiccup and Astrid (though not yet complete), and especially their thoughts on it. I particularly loved that the first scene of this chap, where Toothless comforts Hiccup. Beautifully well written m8. I'm actually interested to see what happens next, cuz once Hiccup and Astrid completely change into dragons...

That's all my thoughts for now m8; it's only been 2 chapters so far, so I don't have much to say. But even though there's only 2 chapters to read, alot of questions rose in my mind.
My thoughts are mainly on how things will go once Hiccup and Astrid have completely changed, cuz there's definitely going to be some serious repercussions once that happens. For one thing, since they've been changed into Night Furies by the Red Death/Queen herself, I'm guessing they will also have that instinct to answer her summons, and thus take part in the dragon raids in Berk? Damn... And also what will the rest of Berk, the Gang, Gobber, and most importantly Hiccup and Astrid's respective parents thoughts be on this whole matter? And, what's this mysterious Emerald Dragon Eye legend... questions abound. Lol.

So to close and wrap this up, I see potential in this story m8, and I say this with complete honesty and sincerity. I've hardly seen anything wrong with this story, unless you count some few errors in writing (most are in spelling btw), but that's just a minor thing. All in all, I think that this is a great story, so hope you don't mind if I join this ride! Really looking forward to continue reading this. :D

Farewell for now m8. Hope this review helped. I'm not really good with words, so forgive me if I'm rambling in this review. And plus, I unfortunately have a bad habit of making my reviews long. :/

-The Burning Pillar