This Tsukune is... really fucking worthless. And this story is pretty much copy paste of others. It's just... you could do something good with it and you fucked it up. I checked comments and they paint a great of picture of even bigger fuck ups.

There are many other stories that I could read. And that what I will do.

Ageha and Shade ... I'd smash.

Anybody else agree?

Any chance of you also uploading A Proper Vampire by DarkSwordMage?

it's a sad day for me, 2019 is the year I loose a favourite fiction au but at the same time start a new life for another!
I thank you for sharing but i'm going to use this idea of a future for my fanfic,
just gonna take some similarities and fit them into my universe

I just realised you actually made her breast size smaller then what it was in the highschool life.
you state it's F cup but in canon she's actually G cup

you are making me angry for a very important reason.

this is a near copy of another dudes work, he's name is Eternal Fire and the fanfic is called coming into his own

now I've tried looking up Ria Sekitan on a Rosario vampire wiki but nothing! another thing is you might think weird coincident using ria sekitan has a name, no the truly weird thing is how you said rai forced tsukune to fuck her not just because but because she knew he was human, then mentioned blackmailing his father!
what is happening, it's like the same fucking story

Very nice

I mean, the thing with tsukune is that to be honest, we don't know if he is dead (he might be dead in the head, if you catch my drift, given the way he interacted with Moka... although bipolar might be a better descriptor, given last chapter's unnecessary paranoia... the thing is, given the reality of what he has done, he doesn't really need anything more to make a decision, it's pretty cut and dry, really a no brainer if you ask me.

Not sure I would say "boring in the middle, exciting in the end"

He should have probably died a few chapters ago, at least we wouldn't have had to witness his partial return to a unwittingly self-satirical caricature. Nobody respects someone that doesn't respect himself. Can't think how low his self esteem might be to have the conversation with Moka he had in this chapter, after what he heard, and after watching her FHD in all her glory on the internet (well, him and the rest of the onanist mob, I guess).

Not sure whether Tsukune is dead now. Better than the satire of himself that the all too forgiving fellow was becoming, honestly... could have sworn he was suffering from bipolar from the difference between the previous and this chapter's behavior...

Not sure where the kid is in the picture

That feel when he thinks he is being a martyr, but ends up being so over the top as to be come its own satire.

When I read "forginveness" here, I am incredulous. He was raped and tortured for her. She abused, emotionally manipulated, hurt and humiliated him. He had to hear what he heard, then see what he saw in the video (along with everyone else), and hear the taunts. Scars that he will never forget and emotional damage that would be hard to move past. What does she have to do for him to say "f**k this, I am cutting my bridges"? Apparently, just not apologize immediately. The semi-paranoid revisionism is not necessary. Moka's actions are more than enough to warrant not wanting to see here ever again. But I am still incredulous that her *timing* was the deal breaker. Not the fact that he had to watch her have sex with Gin, along with every other guy watching her on the internet. No, it was the timing. Simply unbelievable, this is really making suspension of disbelief a hard task: it's not a "hard sell", it's gotten to the point that his goodie-two-shoes, masochistic self sacrificing persona is essentially involuntarily comical. He thinks he is a saintly martyr, in reality he is a clownish caricature. He just *has* to sacrifice and put up with everything, given enough time (long lifespan? bs). The question is: why? What's in it for him? He doesn't owe her anything, surely she can't be so self important, and everyone around her can' t be so delusional, to believe that her having a change of heart means that she is entitled to him wanting to have her back in his life. He has no obligation to take her back, or to forgive her, or to be in the same room with her. In fact, cutting all bridges with her and never seeing her again are pretty much the best thing he could do for himself. He should be building a new life without traitorous snakes, thinking about his happyness. Her emotional state should be of no concern in decisions on how to live his life... surely he has more than paid his dues, and has earned the right to that much egoism at least (if a basic recognition that his own well being matters too could even be called egoism).

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