You have good ideas, and a great imagination. But you need a lot of help in the grammar department. I suggest taking a class or two, and getting a beta/editor to check your work.

Love this story hope there is more.

Love it! Keep going!

All these different Black Cats are going to make Peter's head spin...It's going to be great!

You forgot to mention the reality in which he marries Spider-Woman.

Love it, more please.