Reviews for The Dimension Walker: The Pearl of Chaos |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I understand that |
![]() ![]() Hey what happened to a dangerous mind? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why on wattpad |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope to see more chapters of your work soon! Including the ones with Bianca and Leo! (You might wanna put in there the blog we made) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome chapter & was cool too , plead make more chapter soon |
![]() ![]() Toot toot Here comes the fart arrow! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome chapter & I hope she is ok . Please make more chapter soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved the story, all except for the angel statue. Thanks to doctor who (I miss you David tenant ) I destroy any angel I come in contact with. Though I guess since it was a spooky scene any whoviens watching would just get even more creeped out... Ya... Anyway that was an awesome chapter and not at all rushed, good job, so with that... SMOKE BOMB! *runs and hides behind a bush* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very good chapter! It doesn't seem rushed at all I can't wait for another chapter of Angels and your new story you are creating Shhhhh! People in the comments: you DIDNT hear that from me! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bruce chapter & I hope she is ok . Please make more chapter soon |
![]() ![]() IM FREAKING OUT! I loved the story so far and it just keeps getting better and better, when you mentioned the angel statue in the cemetery I imedietly thought of the episode of doctor where Rory dies because of the last weeping angel in the world and then Amy let's the angel kill her so that she could be with Rory again.. THE FEELS! anyway, love the story and I'm super excited for the next chapter... SMOKE BOMB! *runs and hides behind a bush* |
![]() ![]() ![]() First off: Her almond-shaped were devil red... I think you mean eyes in the middle LOL Second of all: This was a very well written chapter. I didn't expect that Jake would become an important character Third of all: I've had an awful day and this really brightened my mood. So thank you for doing that KISSES! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool chapter & wow prohecy is awsome and character too , I want to know what happen next . Please make more chapter. Ps you welcome |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely love the story so far. I love how Randy and nomi (even though there not in the story very often) have alot of character development and the flash backs, though they are sad, are super awesome. Im super excited for the next chapter but until then... SMOKE BOMB! *runs and hides behind a bush* |
![]() ![]() ![]() P.S. It's Hazel Levesque :) The series made me love reading gods xD So gonna re-read |