You REALLY need to write the conclusion chapters for Milliana and Jenny. You have taken a long hiatus from writing but I really want to read more on several of your story lines. Following you just in case you come back to writing.

I found this chapter to be a bit disjointed. Actually, near the end there, when Kagura tells Milliana she's coming along, it teases at the possibility of a threesome. The lemons were juicy and the story line was interesting.

Dang, coitus interruptus. I would have gone mad. Excellent descriptions of Flare s anatomy :)

I hope you come back to finish this and your other stories. They’re great!

These are interesting not in a bad way but interesting

These chapters are good but it feels like you skipped like 20 steps

You fucking cock blocking asshole

You just forget one extremely important event during the Tartaros Arc. And that is that ACNOLOGIA KILLED IGNEEL AND NOW I'M ALONE!

dann man that was good and my third favorite pairing for natsu

I really want this to continue going, I really do! I really like this and it is so good!

Do Hisui please do natsu x hisui

Do kinana PLEASE DO NATSU X KINANA PLEASSSSSEEEEEEE

unlike the other chapters this one does not really explain how the two ended up in bed together. yes they went on a date but how does natsu go from a starving idiot to realizing theres something between him and kagura

I truly enjoyed the story. The chapter about Ultear and Meredy was my favorite and I truly hope for more.

Fic interessante.
Mas houve alguns erros de continuidade, por exemplo.
Os Destinos colocaram uma barreira que esconde Percy dos deuses e dos monstros, não faz sentido Grover e Chiron estarem atrás de Percy, eles só poderiam encontrar ele depois que a barreira caísse.
E também, na praia você disse que Percy não tinha amigos enquanto conversa com os animais, logo depois você falou que o inútil do Grover era seu melhor amigo, embora esse foi um erro pequeno.
De qualquer forma gostei muito da fic, estou aguardando a rewrite.
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