Reviews for A Little Bit Better
Lilli89 chapter 1 . 9/30/2015
Honestly, this is what I'm waiting for since 2 seasons. Just an Erin is comforted by Jay scene. Please, keep on writing that way. I loved this :) Very, very good.
Kiwiflea chapter 1 . 5/10/2015
This would've been wonderful in the show, but I get why they want her to be more broken before they get back together. Great job!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/1/2015
I'm loving all these one shots (I wish some were longer) about Erin's reaction. I am curious to see how they've written how "dark" they say she'll get...it was a heart breaking (shattering for me) moment seeing Nadia's dead body and having detective lindsay see it for herself. Nadia didn't deserve it.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/1/2015
Yeah, this made things "a little bit better" cheesy, I know.

I've been waiting for your take on this, and it was perfect as usual
B chapter 1 . 4/30/2015
Amazing as usual!
guest chapter 1 . 4/30/2015
cried the whole time reading this, so sad :( will miss Nadia and Erin's sister bond. Thank you
ellie2297 chapter 1 . 5/2/2015
pls add more to this! the crossover was so heartbreaking
Sabrinabinanina chapter 1 . 5/1/2015
This was sweet. heart breaking but so sweet. Love your writing as always
SuzyH82 chapter 1 . 5/1/2015
Aw, I wish that would happen on the show. Thanks for writing this!
masalinstead chapter 1 . 5/1/2015
I'd like to know one word for sad and beautiful. But I don't. So it's just sad and beautiful.
PLLFan865 chapter 1 . 5/1/2015
Hi great one shot! Loved it. Can you make a story where they find Nadia alive make it a Nadia/Lindsay best friends bond. Just a thought.
mom2knjj chapter 1 . 5/1/2015
LOVED IT! Would live even more if there were going to be more chapters, like Hank showing up, or when they get back to Chicago and what happens. Need something to tide us over til the next ep. Please?!
Karamelwood02 chapter 1 . 5/1/2015
Oh my gosh, I loved this! I wish this is what would happen. He loves her so much! Thank you so much for this beautiful story:):) My Linstead heart is in awe! LOL
LaJoyMechell chapter 1 . 5/1/2015
Really how I wished it went afterwards...I don't think I'll ever get used to the idea that lovable, intelligent Nadia reallly gone...she had come so far from that night she skipped out on rehab, to coming back to erin for help..she cleaned herself up and made something for herself in that little year...she wanted to be a cop, and she went on that little patrol with burgess I swear I could have seen her in a uniform helping make chicago a better place..it was in her heart...and went erin cried I was already in tears..such a sad episode..that's why I love what you wrote. It would make sense for Jay to be a solace for erin, someone who she trust dearly...beautifully written..
NALEY23alwaysforever chapter 1 . 5/1/2015
Amazing. Absolutely, completely amazing. I'm so upset nadia is gone hopefully jay can help Erin to get through it
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