Ah, Rio died I was hoping for a tie in with cleo since they are both meowstics

oh god. tears.

omg. loved this chapter! You write battles soooo well.

aww!

really loved this chappie! thanks soooo muc hfor sharing such a deep story.

omg. i love Mulch! and really enjoyed this chapter, btw.

Heeeeh. Like the end. Someone's in trouble!

btw, not mad or anything... but erm... i'm blind and I don't face the wrong way when talking to people. haha. I use my ears to find their voice then I turn to them. not offended, just trying to give a helpful tip.

Thinking I'm liking where this is heading!

Thanks so much for writing and sharing
Mal

I actually teard up. I don't cry usually. This was beautiful

I can see why this is your fav chapter! It was really really gooooood. oh man. loved it.

I'm soooo glad I found this. i'm loving it so far. I was searching through a writers fav stories list. Not finding any goodones, I was about to give up...but then I found your fic! thank goodness. I have no idea where the little voice comes from that tells me to keep looking, but yay! I'm so excited to see where this will go.

Please let there be a sequel. This is one of the best stories I've ever read, and I do mean EVER. Pleasepleaseplease, let there be one...

Great work! I totally love this story.

This was truly an amazing story, from start to finish. I will admit, I started this story back in December and only read the first two chapters, and I wasn't really getting hooked. Then recently, about a week ago, I saw the story was now finished, so I decided to read it. Everything about this story is great, the character development, the way you describe scenes, the plot, and everything else. This was also one of the very few stories that I've read that managed to tug my heart a bit, the emotion in it was unique as each attachment to characters was unique.
This story has many twists and turns, most of witch I didn't expect. I loved some characters and disliked others, as well as disliked at one point but ended up liking them as more was revealed. I do want to point out though, that chapter 69 seemed a little rushed in my opinion, and the deaths that happened in these later chapters didn't quite have enough emotional pull to, or it's just because I'm tired, heh.
Anyway, this was a fantastic story, I look forward to reading the one-shots now

So... it's over...
I can't dream I could ever make anything this amazing. This was just breathtaking, and I'll stick around for anything else you decide to throw our way.
I have a lot more to say, that is for sure, but I'll hold onto it for later- after all, I'm planning on reviewing a few of the previous chapters when I have the time.
Oh, and it looks like Harlequin is still my favorite character. I could go on for hours about how she grew...
I'm also impressed with how you handled Tinker in the end. He was always iffy- intriguing, but with little clues to go on, it didn't lead me far. You expanded upon him towards the end with Starshine and I'm quite happy with it.
-Keep on reading and writing, and see you in another chapter! I have a lot more to say, but so little time to say it right now, so it will have to wait.

That's it huh? What a trip it's been!

You did well wrapping up the story I'd say. Managed to tie up the plot and what happened to everyone while also leaving some things open-ended as a way to leave interpretation (like you said). May not be entirely satisfying in a way, but I can't complain knowing things end on a positive note.

That said, I almost wonder if things ended a bit too positively. Harbinger seems to have reappeared, good as new, without any kind of real explanation since he seemed pretty dead back a few chapters ago. Others are a little less dubious than that one, but I can't help but feel like the dramatic tension you were using was completely inconsequential if everyone lived.

Aside from that? You did well. This has been one of my favorite stories of recent times, and I thoroughly enjoyed reading through early on and becoming completely enraptured by the tale you wove. Thanks for creating such a great story, Del! I certainly look forward to the rest of the one-shots and any other stories you may create!