An interesting take on this one.

Thought this was great so far. Are you still writing it?

Its fucking called dunnwall

this is really interesting i want to see how this ends

Well I’m fucked

the OC works. but i still dont know what to think yet

When is ze next chapter?

Nice...

*snickers* Corvo's a Schnee... this should be entertaining...

I. Need. MORE. (AND I'LL TAKE ALL THE CHAPS I. CAN. GET, YEAH!)

"YEEEEEEAAAAAAA!" YEAH, POP THAT BABY OUT!

Welcome back man, also enjoyed the chapter.

I think in the Death of the Outsider the character will be probably be given the choice to spare to kill the Outsider, as usual. He may be important in subsequent games to, unless they want to get rid of Void Powers, which would kinda suck.

"do you think Jacques would really mess with Corvo for having a Faunus wife if he's already shown how deadly he could be from a young age?"

Jacques might actually encourage the marriage since it'd be a PR boon for the SDC.

Glad to see you back Mentor since your training to be a MMA fighter I've got a question for you. That question being have you heard of the video game killer instinct and the character TJ Combo. If not then I recommend you check out TJ's theme song I'm back to Rise. It really makes you pumped up and I think it will be a good work out song for you. Anyways I'll be waiting for the next chapter patiently.

Glad to see you back. Good work as always. Though I could do with the updates being removed from the chapter list, makes the story look longer, etc, than it actually is.