Reviews for Between Two Worlds |
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BuddhaBuddha chapter 5 . 4/3 This is getting annoying, Ryu says he has accepted this world as his own yet he is still treating it as a story to play out. He needs to just live his own life already and stop thinking about events so much. Those make way more interesting stories than ones constantly centered around canon events. |
BuddhaBuddha chapter 2 . 4/3 I never understood why some SI’s always think a certain way about interacting with kids just because they are more mature mentally. You’d think they would understand the benefits of befriending these characters when they are young. It’s way easier creating a strong bond when they are younger and impressionable. Even if you only look at it from a purely practical standpoint, some of these characters, especially ones like the rookie 9, are clan heirs and will become the heads of their clans when they grow up. I can see nothing but benefits from fostering strong relationships with them. Waiting til they are more mature would simply make it harder to do so. As the mentally older, these SI’s should just deal with it and stop complaining about having to interact with children like it’s beneath them. And from another perspective, ignoring the point I just made, how many people can say they had a chance to experience childhood twice? To just be able to just enjoy it and act like a child again should be enough of a reason to do so. Some authors also seem to forget or simply choose to ignore the fact that even if they are mentally older, their body is still young. That means parts like their brain will give off certain chemicals that would influence their emotions and how they think or act in certain situations. |
Guest chapter 3 . 2/19 Well I gave this story a chance but after 3 chapters all I got out of it so far was that the MC is “smart” but he’s a full blown idiot and that he is weak and kinda a beta |
zeekuzumaki chapter 10 . 1/22 plz plz plz write more this is so good and you shouldn't do the whole 12 years old is too young because i'm reincarnated cliche that gets really old but your story is so good. |
ArghThePirate chapter 10 . 8/11/2019 Hey! Great story here! I really like it thus far. Please do update soon, I reeeeaaaallly want to read more! Thanks so much, and please keep up the great work! :-) |
Valen Goncalvez chapter 10 . 7/7/2019 Very good chapter, i hope you update another soon! |
zerochrisjayv chapter 3 . 5/8/2019 tbh the "i want to help everyone" thing is cliche and annoying |
Kingmaekar chapter 10 . 5/4/2019 Very good story, please keep it up. |
Guest chapter 5 . 2/2/2019 It's clear you didn't read the manga and barely watched the anime thanks for not continuing this waste of time. |
lovefanfictions72 chapter 10 . 12/11/2018 No disrespect.. youve written a great story.. But I find myself wishing more and more that someone just kills your oc for his stupidity and naivety. |
lovefanfictions72 chapter 6 . 12/11/2018 I honestly think its a great story. But there are some things that I see constantly in stories that always bother me. A lack of common sense in the main characters. For example, in this scenario, senju knows that kakashi is always late... but he still comes on time. Or the fact that he wants to keep his family safe... but he fails to interact with naruto who will be a hokage- and has some powerful connections.. |
ASHARI463274348 chapter 2 . 10/1/2018 AWESOME! |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/3/2018 343323 |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/31/2018 GEIFIVF |
abdultahir38 chapter 5 . 8/20/2018 why did you put him in team 7 what will he learn there you should have given him a tutorship with yamato |