Reviews for Clockwork bird |
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Fire-of-the-Ocean chapter 13 . 4/9 I mean, if he heard it from them he'd probably accept it |
Fire-of-the-Ocean chapter 6 . 4/9 I like the detail about Zane copying what he's seen in movies |
LindseyPrint chapter 1 . 1/5/2018 AHHHHHHH! This is an amazing story, but one problem, it's Cole BrookStone |
BionicFemme chapter 21 . 1/1/2018 I'd also like to add to my review in the next chapter if you have any recommendations for Ninjago fiction. It doesn't have to be specifically Technoshipping, just overall good writing and premises. |
BionicFemme chapter 22 . 1/1/2018 Just finished the story! I found this story through your more recent fiction, Broken Circles. While the writing in Broken Circles is better than this one (as in fluidity), I still immensely enjoyed this work. This is one of the few Ninjago fanfictions I've found that are multi-chaptered with a pairing I enjoy, have an interesting premise, and are well-written. 3! |
Guest chapter 10 . 2/20/2017 Cool! Emmet (From the Lego Movie) is Jay's cousin? Huh. No wonder they both look kinda the same. |
TheWoofsterr chapter 10 . 1/3/2016 okie dokie |
Ninjago1019 chapter 22 . 6/24/2015 That was an amazing story! I loved it! |
Guest chapter 22 . 6/20/2015 aaaah! i loved this story so much! my hank you for writing this! :) |
Ninjago1019 chapter 21 . 6/15/2015 That was beuetiful! I so cannot wait for more! I love it! You are an amazing person don't let nobody tell u different! |
alessiaskyler chapter 21 . 6/14/2015 Finally! This waiting drove me crazy! Come on, Jay. Was that so hard? I can't wait for the next chapter *-* |
your the best chapter 21 . 6/14/2015 yay thank you for the long chapter! :) |
Kiara of the Elven chapter 21 . 6/14/2015 OH SNAP UPDATE SOON PLEASE |
ambaee chapter 19 . 6/10/2015 Awww, I love how you capture the way they feel so goodly. Is that even the right way to say that...? |
ambaee chapter 18 . 6/8/2015 Awww, don't cry Jay. *Pats his head* Great job! This is one of the best stories I have read yet! |