Reviews for The Wizard of Steel
Kudou Shinichi chapter 1 . 4/18
Ghost Ron is amazing. I've never seen that before. Very clever.
Noctus Of The Thousand Blades chapter 3 . 1/29
actually not entirely true. harry will in many ways be STRONGER then Clark. and here is why. a little known weakness of most kryptonians is magic. and here is why. their abilities are 100% biologically natural, and not originating from a mystical source. because of this, magic affects them the same as any other human. their abilities are non-mystical in origin and thus they have no inborn resistance to magical energy that people with mystical powers have.

it is why Wonder Woman is able to harm Clark with her weapons. they are magical in nature and thus bypass his invulnerability.

because of this, harry will always be more powerful then clark, due to his magic. and harry will have less weaknesses then clark.

if 2 powered kryptonians wail on each other? while it would hurt, it would take a LOT of effort to really injure one another. their invulnerability would tank the damage, and the light of the yellow sun would heal them. so a fight between two kryptonians could take MONTHS to end. and no, that is not an exaggeration.

whereas harry as a magical kryptonian will alway have the advantage over the non magical variety. he simply needs to channel raw magic into his limbs, and his punches would bypass the invulnerability of his opponent. allowing harry to, in theory, punch a hole straight through the likes of Zod or any other non magical Kryptonian in one blow. because unlike them, harry was born with magic, and is thus resistant to it. whereas other Kryptonians are vulnerable to it.

magic neutralizes kryptonian abilities, without the toxic side effects of Kryptonite. so a magical punch from a solar powered Kryptonian? yeah, instant game over for other kryptonians.

while his strength may not be on clark's level, his magic would make that a moot point.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/17/2019
About to read the chapter but just want to say. The problem isn’t that the biology is different (I mean it’s part of it) but that a when people have sex they get really into it. Clark or Harry in this case would probably blow a hole in a girls chest by mistake. They’d have to give new meaning to taking it slow. Kara is so strong she has to use a complex series of mirrors to shave her legs
AustrianShadow chapter 1 . 11/16/2019
Aloah
I've just re-read this nice tale and found that it is a to long time since you updated.
Is there any chance that you will take up the quill again?
BR
Shadow
Khatix chapter 1 . 10/9/2019
Dumbledore is senile and so blind to his actions, he marked Harry like the prophecy said thus he is the Dark Lord not to mention he spread it as Harry defeated a dark lord same as Dumbledore both are equal in that regard and both are equal in their popularity.

I wonder if that event that unlocked his Kryptioan powers also removed all the spells Dumbledore casted on him.
Bronze chapter 1 . 8/31/2019
It's quite obvious that Fumblemort is, in fact, the Primary Dark Lord of the late twentieth to early twenty-first centuries. Were that last statement not true Fumblemort would not have oblivated and imperioused Sirius and carved a wound into Harry's forehead. But seeing as he has, my point stands. Thus the prophecy is about him as well as Voldemort.
Wassa110 chapter 6 . 8/31/2019
You do a lot wrong with this story. You change the characters too much, you change the world too much without giving explanationg into how, and/or why. That's my only real complaint.
Guest chapter 6 . 10/14/2018
Pity that you abandoned this story, as it had a great deal of potential.

Pity, you limited this to Veela only, as Hestia/Donna would've been a good natch as well.

Same goes for the "Greengrass" sisters and 4th Year and the declaration of being of age would let him meddle there

As a Tamarrwan/Kryptonian hybrid would be more powerful than his/her parents.

Kryptonians aren't really super strong or durable etc. Damn near all their powers are TK based, as TK is the Swiss Army knife of Psionics.

Force fields to protect (durability, speed) or lif (strength and flight), TK on an atomic scale leads to pyro- or ekectrokibesis by way of agitation. Just as cryokibesis is accomplished by haktong atomic movement..

Most of the other eyesight powers or senses would fall either in the psychometabolism or Clairsentience field, the latter also covers aspects like precogs or ESP.

All of this, while empowered by a yellow sun, whereas a blue supercharges them and red drains them of energy.

Tamarreans on the other hand, absorb all solar light equally and can even drain a Kryptonian/Daxamite of their energy reserves.

Granted, normally their species is in the 1 to 10T range iirc, with their strength, although both Black- and Starfire come in at 100T, due to the experiments performed upon them.

Which in Marvel would make them top tier, whereas DC has the elite lifting in the thousands of tons by comparison.

Still, any offspring ought to get both the psionic enhancements as well as the Tanarrean physical ones and a far more efficient solar radiation absorption ability.

Course, they may also inherit the chromium allergy. Like getting hit by a bad fku. And possible vulnerability to Kryptonite.

But anyway, strengthwise, they ought to be equal or above your Fleur. Daphne as Lady Black, as I doubt that Azkaban has done his swimmers any good. Astoria, still the Last Greengrass, Fleur as Lady Potter and no clue for Donna.

Side note, DC is VERY unclear as to how strong an Amazon actually is, from just over peak human to strong enough to hurt Superman.

I'd suggest treating them like the average Olympian/Asgardian from Marvel and have Diana and Donna stronger, due to divine blessings working as a strength multiplier. Factor of 5 at the minimum should be enough.

OR you can point at their own Divine heritage. Hypolita, their motger, is the daughter of Ares after all. And if their Father is Zeus or Hades, well, that makes them 3/4 Divine. No different from Gilgamesh of Uruk or Medea of Colchis.

Would further explain why they're stronger than average.

Raven.. I'm not sure about.
A) Too squishy compared to the others and B) no more titles to boot.

Hell, Susan would be easier to work in under a Line Continuance Contract and counteracting her fragility with the Power of Shazam. Taking the place of the Marvel Family.

Not hating or dissing, as I like the character. Just don't see a proper angle for her with Hestia/Donna having taken the lead.

*shrugs
Not that it matters, seeing as, like I mentioned at the start, this seems to have been abandoned.

Ah well..

May as well point others to "TheBeardedOne" and his "Last Mage of Krypton" series. As that's a HP is Kal-El in a HP/Marvel world and it's finished to boot.

No real romance though.
Book Sister chapter 6 . 7/24/2018
I’ve said this for most of your works now, I wish you had continued them. You are an amazing writer and I wish I could have your talent. Good luck!
N. A. Wennerholm chapter 6 . 6/13/2018
It has been three years since the last update would like to see this updated and finished.

Plus would love to see Dumbledore get what he deserves for all the lives he had ruined. And all the immoral, unethical and illegal shit he has done. On top of the Ministry of Magic undergo a massive cleansing purges of all corruption that is within.

And would defiantly like to see him reunited with his Brother and his Godfather. Even show where Sirius is helping to raise Clark just as the Kents would help with Harry. Heck Even show the Tonks also helping their cousin raise those boys. Plus I hope Ron Saw Dumbledore for who and what he really is and Tells his parents and siblings. And Maybe one of his powers as a ghost he can show them all his memories of what he has seen and learned.

Plus got a kick out of Harry not being the only extraterrestrial in the School. With the Greengrass sisters and whoever else. And maybe Dumble ass dork somewhat knows but not completely Because with this Chapter and You get the impression he wants to rule the world and want to use all the Aliens to that end. ASSHOLE!
Holios the Demon Companion chapter 3 . 6/4/2018
Ron doesnt want to go to the P.I.T.
Mitsukini Haninozuka chapter 6 . 3/31/2018
More chapters please?
lordblink chapter 6 . 2/16/2018
I look forward to hopefully, someday seeing further development on the story. Keep up the great work!
Rago Dragovian chapter 6 . 1/2/2018
"You know, I always have wondered what someone would write when they hadn't the reading comprehension of a blind rabid squirrel and a mindset that disallows them to understand anything more complicated than filling a diaper. Thank you showing me.

Don't get me wrong, your grammar is decent, but your dialogue is stilted, your characterization is way off, your descriptions are lacking, your understanding of theology is flawed at best and you failed to actually honor the challenge correctly. This is one of those monumental trainwrecks that is up there with 'My Immortal'"
WhiteElfElder chapter 6 . 12/22/2017
I have to wonder how long before Harry gets pissed and burns a hole through something from staring? Is Arianna actually helping Albus, or just feeding his ego to hasten his demise?
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