Reviews for A Black Wind
Revathy chapter 4 . 3/31
Hi...
I am writing this review in between tears...The Black Wind was so heartwrenching and beautiful at the same time.
I have never cried after reading any story or fanfi, maybe because jay halstead is my favourite character.
Anyway only a few can make profoun impact on the reader and that includes you. Keep writing more
and wish you alll the best .
2Jesse's1city chapter 4 . 10/12/2017
Oh my gosh. My face hurts from all the crying. That was probably the best story I've ever read. Well done!
Geeralda chapter 4 . 7/10/2017
Loved it. Tears keep on running.
Guest chapter 4 . 6/22/2017
Hey you. This was so good... i cried like the hell... seriously... there were river of tears ! I know i'm very emotional but here... it was reeeeeealy great...
Thank you again ()
simplevi chapter 4 . 2/1/2017
Im a wreck after reading this!
Knowing that this might happen on the show.
Im griefing only to read. Nice one.
water4willows chapter 1 . 11/24/2016
"I grabbed his face tightly in my hands, staring at his closed eyelids, mourning the colour of his eyes and the shape of his smile." Best line of the fic. Just gorgeous.
JenniferC16 chapter 4 . 5/7/2016
ay...you made me cry! very nicely written.
jcampbell943 chapter 4 . 11/8/2015
Okay I am a blubbery mess. This fanfiction broke a little piece of my heart. I know it's silly but wow! I kept hoping like Erin that it wasn't real but at the end I finally realized like her that it was.
linstead4ever chapter 4 . 6/2/2015
I loved it there wasn't a moment where my heart didn't ache, especially in this last chapter at the end of it. But I still haven't figured out why you chose yo cut off Jay!?
Linsteadforever chapter 1 . 6/1/2015
I cried so hard reading this last chapter. So. Damn. Good. Part of me was secretly hoping it was gonna be all part of an elaborate plan and somehow jay was alive but ugh hit me right in the feels. Can't wait for another story! Maybe you could do an alternate chapter of this story where he turns out alive.
Ness chapter 4 . 6/1/2015
This is my favorite story in here so i can not wait to read more!
sammyleighlee chapter 4 . 6/3/2015
You are an incredible writer! But this story PHYSICALLY HURTS ME. Omg can your next fic PLEASE be something at least semi- happy? My sanity depends on it! (:
masalinstead chapter 4 . 6/1/2015
This hurt so much. Right in the feels. Again. This is the most heartbreaking story I have ever read. Ever. But it is so amazing and so beautiful. Full of grief, sadness and tears. I will read it again. More than once. I am in love with your stories. You are fascinating author and the only reason I like mondays.
Oh Hello Chicago chapter 4 . 6/1/2015
Great story I loved reading it with all the emotions that flow through the whole thing! Just next time, MAKE IT A JAY WHUMP STORY, BUT DO NOT KILL HIM PLEASE! He can be in the hospital, sick, but he can't die! Thank you! See ya on the flip side!
SuzyH82 chapter 4 . 6/1/2015
Okay...crying...so sad...but so good. This fic made me realise that they can NEVER kill off Jay Halstead. Amazing, emotion driven writing! Loved it! Thank you for sharing it so I could read it!
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