I love this and also the other piece.
Hope there's a continuation.

Eek! Yay!
I just read your companion piece this morning and was hoping there was a version for Vision!
Your pieces are just lovely and very well written and I really enjoyed both and they're just fantastic glimpses into what may have been.
Thank you for sharing your writing!

This is awesome!

The Vision's point of view is good. And who cares if the Vision exists in the cradle at this point? I don't, because this is well-written enough to convince me!

As promised, here I am.
What really struck me from this fic was the angle it took and how much it just fit. I will happily accept his as canon, because in my mind it doesn't tread on any toes, but yet answers questions. A hard balance to find in the world of fanfiction.
Why would Vision claim to be on the side of life so quickly after awakening? What gave him so much loyalty to these strangers? I doubt it was the origins of JARVIS alone. It was short, sweet, and fit perfectly into the established lore, so thank you for that! A joy to read. No doubt I will come back to this one a few times.

Sure.

Beautiful!

It does make sense and this is a cute little gem of a story.

Really cute story :)