my first thought when reading this omg its connor and jude again

i am reading this in 2019.

so i get writers block and its really hard i think u should go iinto more details wiht your books i reaally like reading detailed books and maybe when u get done with some other books i like reading about gay storys and overcomming homofobia so maybe glee or something else.

Chapter 20: WU TANG CLAN AND EMIMEN FOR CHRISTS SAKE!

This story was amazing. :) It ended perfectly. But I'm kinda sad it is over.

Why not taught Wally how to perform his revenge in a cleaner and more efective way so that there's no posible way they can back tracked to him and that the victims don't survive? It would be far more interesting.

I think that the parents of the kids who bullied Tim should be removed from their homes and the parents arrested (and, maybe, said parents can have the bad luck of getting caught in a prision riot and die in the crossfire).

In this chapter I DEFINETLY LIKED that we got to see for the first time Jonnor in a parenting role, but what I DEFINETLY DIDN'T LIKE was that this new pairing, Walter/Timmy, feels like a carbón copy of Jonnor.

I like the idea of introducing other sexuality in one of your main characters but I would have founded more interesting if the crush from Timmy wasn't mutual, like if Wally liked some other friend of theirs; picture it as if (God forbids it) Connor had a crush on Jude but he liked Taylor or Jax (I know their your OC and not canon but I like them), we wouldn't had Jonnor (again, God forbids it) but we could get to see how do they frienship worked from that point.

I can't stop imagining Wally being sassy at school

Evan could actually be a reincarnaton of Dr. Who, and HOLY SHIT HE CAN ACTUALLY BUY A WHOLE TOWER AND A HALF IN WTC!

It has to be destiny for them to be Friends when they were Little kids and then fall for each other after all those years; that or a writer who supports the Jonnor fandom HAHAHAHAHA!

THAT'S AN AWSOME UNCLE!

He's practically resolving much of the material issues for Jonnor, they're his favorite nephew and his boyfriend, but he spoils them as if they were his, imagine now what will he do for his actual son and his cuople.

Now I'm sure I like Connor's Uncle Evan, I have to take some minutes to stop laughing LITERALLY

Your poem Loss was obviously written for this chapter so it is a perfect match, but your poem Waterfall of tears has so much more layers, that it's truly amazing.

Things like this makes me wanna hunt down KKK and similar organisations.