That's ok, I didn't need my heart anyway... *Sniffles*

Shot through the heart and you're to blame...
seriously though, I didn't know what to think of her throughout this whole thing but oh my fucking deity! My soul hurts and I love it.

This story is very interesting. I honestly feel 50/50 about the ending (mostly because L thinks that Rin is the Second Kira and probably hates her now) but I really loved the build up to the climax! I stayed up all night last night reading it on my phone since my laptop wasn't usable until now.
Anyways, I hope we get to hear more stories from you. I would definitely read them!
Hope you're having a good day :) xx

holy hell I've been siting here staring at the screen wide mouthed this ending and the build up to it is the best I have ever read

What.
What.
GHSKJHFSJ SHE DIED?! BUT I LIKED HER SHE WAS GOOD THERE WAS NOTHING AND THEN SHE DIED BUT I DIDN'T WANT HER TO WHY DID YOU DO THIS TO ME?
Ahem.
Alright, now that that's over...
This is an incredible fanfiction, and you have my absolute respect, Author-san. Ugh. I don't even know what to say. I'm just gonna favorite this and cry in a corner somewhere, alright?
Thank you for breaking my heart.
...At least L lives...

OHMYGOD. SO MUCH SADNESS AND THAT THE SAME TIME HOLY SHIT, THAT WAS REALLY WELL WRITTEN.

Dude. This fucked me up. Great job fitting rin into the storyline. How you altered the ending was beautiful, and knowing how the anime goes, it's bittersweet seeing all the tragedy that Rin prevented without knowing. God, that was an amazing read. I'm heavily impressed... at the same time a little disappointed that L. Will never know if her sacrifice. But death note isn't really about such fluff, so it's really fitting.
Good job! 10 outta 10, would recommend!

... I think I'm in love. With this story. I liked how thought out you had her character and from the beginning, you had her history all thought out. It was a bit brief, in a way, but at the same time, it felt perfectly balanced. And that craving that I have to know what L thought about all this makes me feel this lovely bittersweet desire that will never be satisfied and I adore and completely hate it. Thus, I love the story with trepidation. Thank you for writing it.

Why did she choose not to answer the question at the beginning I wonder... I'm kinda curious as to how exactly did she deduced that the top detectives are all L. But I'm liking that she's really smart in her own way.

For some reason your style of writing reminds me of the feeling of watching an anime called durarara. Not sure exactly why. Of course, I meant that in a positive manner. I'm liking what I read so far!

aww soo sad a end

Wow... That's a nice way to end it . But Aww Rin ! That's so sad , but I guess worth it to her . Btw , I was wondering if you would consider writing another chapter to show the task forces reactions ? Thanks ! And merry (late) christmas !

looking forward to the rewrite, and congrats on completing this one!

I'm so happy that you updated. ) Your cliff hangers just about kill me though.

Such a good story so far! Just hoping L doesn't die this time round. Rin and L NEED to love be together! ;P