Well, as inspirational as you screwed it to do.
You just made me see Harry Potter taking his anger on beasts while spouting some inspirational bullshit.

He did not take his revenge. Nor did he accomplish anything, yet, he acted as if he just avenged himself and stood above Voldemorts dead body.

The scenes were incredible, alright. But the ending was pathetic. No, I do not mean that he was hurt and actually needed assist to finish it.
I am talking about the lines he said. It doesn't make freaking sense? Why say something shitty witty like that in that situation? I mean, getting poetic on the verge of death? Seriously?

I am dissapointed.

I have to admit, when I started reading this, I was worried. The first chapter left a bit to be desired. But the following chapters more than lived up to what the summery hinted at. I'm sorry to see it hasn't been updated in four years, but thank you all the same for what was posted here for us to read.

The one note that comes to mind for this chapter is relating to the scoring system. You said in the beginning of the task that champions don't "have to" defeat their dragons, but if they do, they'll "get 10 additional points". Even if we only give Harry 10 points for defeating "his" dragon, that should give him a score of 58. If we give him 10 points for each dragon he beat, that'd be 88 total. Unless you don't see him as forcing a dragon to submit as "defeating" it.

Harry shouldn't even contemplate forgiving the Ron in this story. Ron grew up in the magical world and has a brother who's a dragontamer. Not telling Harry about the dragons while telling Cedric is nothing short of Ron trying to kill Harry. Forgiving Ron because he has low IQ is like forgiving Wormtail because he wasn't smart enough to know that leading Voldemort to the Potters would endanger their lives and possibly lead to their deaths.

I have not come accross a more stupid ff than this , the writter is so bad that I am sort of words to describe , why harry looks what others are doing instead of defeating the dragon, he gets angry then he defeats a dragon then looks around what the teachers are doing, then he again gets scared then he defeats a dragon then he looks again at what teachers are doing

Hope you come back to this

I had to stop in the first half of the first chapter. I don't like angst and drama shit. And it felt like a Bible or some religious shit. Nope, bye.

Please Can update.
awesome time plot line

Love this Story hop for more soon. It's a great twist on theme.

Please update your story soon!

This is a good story! I love the concept and the choice of characters. Sirius is pretty cool I hope he goes on!

way to much words, even when facing dragons on and on endlesss rambling so much so that it felt like harry stood still for 5min waiting and watching dragons hacing hia midlife crisis. its pretty awesome, its also pretty stupid

Loving this. Would be great to see an update.

in what dimension did you find rapgod marshall maTTHEWS ?!

Seeing as how the author won't respond to a PM, I guess all I can do is hope for an update someday soon.