Reviews for Naruto: Strings and Theory
jamthacreator chapter 38 . 2h
This story is one of the best fanfictions I have ever read. I can't way to read what you have next in store!
CorruptedFlame chapter 6 . 3/5
Who the hell is Minna?
Antianti12 chapter 4 . 8/25/2019
I read this along time ago don't know why I stopped but it probably had to do with the Kaka sensei shit it's so cringy man any story I read with it I stop I don't care if its good or not I'm gonna read a little bit more hopefully it stops.
Guest chapter 4 . 7/9/2019
Type your review fic always like this wave then uchiha become traitor hahaha useless fic like ur life just die useless writer
mrjordanriver chapter 38 . 5/4/2019
Exceplent story. I loved it.
Chimera Hex chapter 4 . 4/10/2019
In skill overview Sasuke/Naruto:

"No one could 'honestly' say..."
I think you mean this in the indeterminate sense. That the lapse in skill is no longer apparent upon observation.

In my personal opinion: I don't think 'honesty' is the pitch you were going for.
Try a form of perceptive distinction.
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Workshop/Departure scene:

"I am very proud and blessed (by kami) to have known you."

(By kami) is unnecessary for this sentiment to carry. It's almost disruptive to the personal sentimentality.
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How does a puppet use scrolls?
Chimera Hex chapter 5 . 4/10/2019
Warning: long winded.

How does a puppet use scrolls?

In skill overview (Sasuke/Naruto):

(No one could ‘honestly’ say...)

I’m confident you meant this in a differentiating sense
Guthixx chapter 1 . 11/25/2018
lol magibear century is 100 decade is 10 so 4 decades 40 yeara
magibear chapter 28 . 8/15/2018
Soooorrrrrryyyyyyy jiraiya said he has 40 decades on naruto . 40 decades is 400 years! How old is he?!
magibear chapter 28 . 8/15/2018
Soooorrrrrryyyyyyy jiraiya said he has 40 decades on naruto . 40 decades is 400 years! How old is he?!
LordComaPatient chapter 1 . 4/25/2018
what the fuck is that cover picture
Guest chapter 38 . 3/9/2018
Now that was an interesting read
Im Not Itachi chapter 33 . 2/28/2018
Yay strength through plot convenience. Multiple effortless uses of jutsu from someone with low reserves and an entirely superior opponent backpedaling because of stupidity. Suddenly she doesn't need stimulants that put her under full combat efficiency for over a month and can just punch with the best of them despite solely training her toxicology to the point of making what is effectively a "Tsunade Stimulant." That's one hardcore plot handjob you've got there.
Atheist God chapter 1 . 2/13/2018
good fic, but way too much japanese
RiIl chapter 12 . 12/19/2017
you use far too much Japanese
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