Hi! I really like this fan fiction and haven't reviewed yet, so I figured why not do it now? You're a great writer and I really like this story. I'm wishing I had your talent for writing. Is it possible for you to write a story based on the time Donnie was really sick as a kid?

Great story! Got in my top 10, thank you very much

Thank you. This story was very cute!

Stockman was just... amazing in this chapter. Haha lol

this was a wonderful story!

Awww... :,)

Yay! Donnie is back to normal! Glad he was able to have that talk with Karai. He is going to have some major PTSD, I would think, after being kidnapped then mutated twice then going through all those ages, so glad his family will be there for him, and kinda sad the story is over bc reading those conversations btwn him and his bros would be interesting. But, that was a good end to the story, and a natural one. Great job!

Great job on the story, it was great, keep up the great work and keep on writing..

Hey! It's me. You are an amazing author.
(AND NO, I am not a stalker.)
I just wanna say, like my last comment, you deserve more favs.
Thanks for a great story.

What an amazing story, great job :) I look forward to reading more of your work.

Oh I loved this story since the begining to the end, and I'll be waitng for your next chapter

That was a great story! Love the ending!

Thanks for update. And update soon! Your story:unpredictable the other side.

you did an amazing job! Congratulations on finishing!

I'm not crying. You're crying, haha, no I'm not actually crying but it feels like I am. This story was so good, ahh omg Karai and Donnie bonding is so cute! Anyway, I really loved this story from the start and can't wait for the other story to be updated. (I can't believe this stories over ;-;)