Reviews for now, for the second act |
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![]() ![]() Oh man |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the hard work love the story _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story! Please update |
![]() ![]() ![]() could you please update? This story is Amazing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() could you please update? This story is Amazing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Will u update pleaseeee!? |
![]() ![]() Hiiii, plss update uhuuu |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is awesome! I love the Anko cameo and the short bit at the end! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is brilliant! Keep going! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I relaly hope you continue the fic soon :3 |
![]() ![]() please continue |
![]() ![]() Beautiful, fantastic! I love it! Thanks for writing this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ono I’m at the last chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() is this story never updating? is it dead? |
![]() ![]() ![]() it's a pitty that you don't continue the story. Team-time-travel is so seldom and here it is even well written! With authentic reactions to their travel and how the non-travel-people react to the change in personality. I am curious who Rin has healed but I guess I'll never know. I like your characterisations especially how Obito reacts to Itachis pacifism! And you don't need to worry about Gai, he seems really good! Bonus-Obito was creepy (who would guess?) but it was an intresting bonus, even if the story's original start is better in my opinion. Thank you for your work so far and if you ever update I'll read the next chapter with glee, Sona |