PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CAN I HAVE MORE!?

UPDATE PLEASE!

something is telling me that 'nelly' would love it if it was her daddys and NO one would bat an eye if Jay stepped in the role of father of Erin's baby.

def intrigued update soon.

Please continue

This was good I'm late at reading this but I enjoyed it!

This needs some work. You go into way too much detail. Some detail is good, yes, but describing what everyone is wearing in each 'scene' is overkill. As is the saying everyone's full name in each scene. It reads as awkward and doesn't flow very well.

There are also some inconsistencies in your story. In one sentence you said that Erin didn't remember a single thing about the guy, yet she wasn't that drunk? It doesn't add up. Neither does Jay saying that there are 'ways to find out who he is', how? How are there ways to find out who he is if she doesn't remember a single thing about him?

The second part is the pregnancy part. If you are going to write things that have certain time lines, you need to do the research and get those time lines correct. At 2 months, a baby is the size of a kidney bean, not a lemon. Erin would still be in the morning sickness stage of the pregnancy, and she would definitely NOT be showing at two months along. Some people don't even realize they are pregnant at that point. It just does not flow right and definitely takes a lot away from the story as a whole.

This is really cute thus far...I like how this is going to end up a his family her family ending.

i love this story idea, please tell me you're going to continue?

Excited for this story

CONTINUE!

I like this continue

I like your writting style.

why cannot it be jays? maybe she was pregnant before and she did not know.

as fic its good but if creators ever get idea do this on show, it will be awful.

I feel like Jay is going to end up with full custody over Janelle pretty soon...

I love this already!