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![]() ![]() This was absolutely beautiful. I've always yelled at Anne when she stuck her nose up at our lovely Gilbert Blythe. Your writing was perfect as you kept her character, but ended the unforgiveness sooner. |
![]() ![]() I think I've commented this before but this is s and cute and well written and sweet and believabl love it |
![]() ![]() Oh, keep writing! This was beautiful, and the second time I read the end half I was smiling...! All the way through. Oh, couldn't there be a sequel to this with what happens next? Please? I beg of you... |
![]() ![]() ![]() You managed to master LMM's style, especially here :) Anne's stately stubbornness is PERFECT and hilarious, and her melting at last under Marilla's jurisdiction and bonding over Roman history with Gilbert was absolutely adorable. The humor, the melodrama (on Anne's part, anyway), and the slowly budding romance was all done in perfect homage to LMM's wonderful storytelling. And it works as a fantastic AU, where the LONG gap of "not talking" ends far, far sooner, as it should be. Very nice and lovely fic :) |
![]() ![]() cute! if only...i love fics set in the first book, glad i found this |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay... I would have tried for more wordy comment, but currently I have no idea what to say. You have shown the budding friendship beautifully. Thank you for writing ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really enjoyed this, thank you Is there a sequel planned? Maybe a followup a bit later where they get engaged earlier than in the books? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Perhaps Marilla should have made that ultimatum from the start. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! Your writing style is absolutely georgeous as our wonderful Anne would say and the story is really interesting - I wish it had no end. The characters are beautifully pictured (I'm glad we got in to Gilbert's mind) as much as the nature. I've always envied Lucy Maud Montgomery the talent to describe so poetically the outside world and I think you also possess it. All I lack in your fanfic is an apology from Anne for her behaviour towards Gilbert. He deserved it, don't you think? And Roman Empire IS interesting, Mrs Linde! Look, someone has just „veni vidi vici” my heart! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow that was wonderful. It was so sweet! |
![]() ![]() This was very good! I love how you wrote Anne and Gilbert's dialogue. This was amazing to read! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this a lot! |
![]() ![]() Love it! Very, very in character. I like how Anne was determined to be friendly to Gilbert in order to offset Marilla's stubborn disbelief that she could do it, and how that turned into a real friendship. |
![]() ![]() I was totally ENRAPTURED by the story...and thought Marilla's character seems unusual...I loved her...You really are an excellent story writer... |
![]() ![]() BRAVO |