thatnwas absolutely perfect. just wish it had happened like this back in season 4

Lovely!

AAAH I KNOW RIGHT I ALMOST FELT OFF MY CHAIR WITH EXCITEMENT WAITING FOR HER TO SAY THE WORDS AND THEN SHE DOES THAT BUT I STILL LOVE YOU EMMA (SORRY FOR THE YELLING HAHAH)

I know! All I could think was "you're gonna chicken shit outta this NOW?!" I much prefer your version!

I SO agree. SO SO SO AGREE!
Also, love Killians POV.
And I'm just going to add this cuz I wanna spread it around in case anyone missed it:
They're implying that Walt Disney was the last author. Cuz when the apprentice said that the last author had passed away recently, well Disney died barely a few days before the TV store scene with Isaac.

Finally someone wrote it the way it should have happened. She should have told when she found him at the loft. So he would have had a chance to say it back.

btw sorry, that last guest review is mine, forgot to log in.

Right there with you! Omg I watched his face go from building up hope to hopeful to ready to burst with hopefulness, to deflation, to playing it off with a smile while in his mind he probably looked similar to when she handcuffed him to the beanstalk while he screamed, "SWAN!" I sure as hell was. Sitting there face-palming and screaming "dammit Swan!" This was perfect! Thank you!

Yes! Honestly, it's like you read my mind - that would have been the perfect moment! Loved this version so much! 3

Thank you so much for this. LOVED it.

Apparently she was just waiting for a sucking dark vortex of evil doom and destruction.

YOU FIXED IT!

so good!

Don't apologize because that made me mad as hell too!

This is the way it should have happened. Thx for sharing it!

I'm still crying. I just can't help it its so many wtf Emma noo! I cajdjsjsjhabenzhhsesjhhb!

I agree with you! Why wait? Thanks for the scene that should have happened this way!