The devil himself just lost to crocodile ,let that sink in

Pretty sure you have just copied most of this from luffys renewed adventure , I thought I recognised it ,when did Alvida join this crew ?

Why are they bothered about the crew finding out about their relationship, it’s just putting stress into a pregnant woman ,her sisters tried it on and now Anna is asking if he is single , it’s just dumb and has no point at all

This all seems very familiar , and luffy decides to tell some random woman his secret before he even tells his wife or crew , you really need to have a word with yourself

Can’t luffy just kill all these fuckers and get it over with ?

Please don’t write sanjis name alongside apis name next to the words compromising situation , sounds horrible

That is 1 fast sea king ,I forgot to say earlier that I researched every vessel, Which I enjoyed

So smoker still beat him , wtf , pathetic

Would you like to dance luffy, I would love to , but not tonite I’m going back to the ship,leaving her crying with a broken heart , my god that is so fucking romantic , shove the lemon up your arse mate you ruined it moron

Seriously , first Kuro and now Arlong is fucking joining ,this chapter sucked

Buggy shit himself, nodachi says no , it’s nearly as tall as me lol I’m only 5’8 his blade is 5’ if it stuck out by 4’.

One down , everybody else to go lol

I’m itching to see what he is capable of ,bearing in mind you said twice that luffy maybe the strongest person alive , I hope it carries through the story

Great first chapter , pumped to read this , it’s an interesting concept , let’s see how and where it goes

Luffy... are you forgetting you control water... smoker is literally grass compared to you at any time.