Reviews for Bug Boy: Temari Edition
WhiteElfElder chapter 2 . 11/18/2019
If Harry ever comes across The Stone, then he may find some peace.
rebekahalana chapter 2 . 7/22/2018
I really hope you regain inspiration for this story . I just reread BUG BOY in it's entirety as well as these 2 chapters . I really want to see the new team show up for their test . I can only imagine how those 3 will act after 5 hours of tramping though a forestfighting . I find myself wondering if Aine (sp?) will show up in the morning, perfectly coiffeddressed, only to wind up with her hair tangled with bits of branches , dress torncovered in mud , while limping in her 1 remaining high heel ... just thinking of it had me in stitchesD
Hopefully your computer will be repaired soon so you can access your stories. You are a very talented writer (one of my favorites actuallyI miss reading your chapters as they come out.
The Red Dementor chapter 2 . 11/23/2015
I wonder how different this will be ...
ptl4ever419 chapter 2 . 10/16/2015
Just read through Bug Boy with this 'ending' this time and quite like it :D
Sailor Dying-Will chapter 2 . 5/30/2015
I was rereading this chapter and realised that you've got Satoshi saying earlier in the chapter that Sakura was going to be in one of the teams that he'll be training but you've got one team the same and the other completely different, with no Sakura.
Just thought I'd bring that to your attention. Love all your stories. You're a great author.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/25/2015
Harry becoming Hokage should have no bearing on Naruto eventually taking on the role. It's stupid to think that it would. In the long run it would probably mean more to him if Harry passed the position onto him later.
Gon Freaks chapter 2 . 5/19/2015
OK, is it me or am I not seeing really a difference in this new story to the other?
exillion chapter 1 . 5/18/2015
holy crap man... your premises for stories are absolute crap. Exceptional writing ability, but terrible ideas beyond belief.
Pedro52 chapter 2 . 5/18/2015
Nice
ultima-owner chapter 2 . 5/18/2015
nice chapter
shugokage chapter 2 . 5/18/2015
Interesting story and good luck!
geetac chapter 2 . 5/18/2015
I like the chapter
War Sage chapter 2 . 5/18/2015
Good chapter
Acolyte of the Blood Moon chapter 1 . 5/15/2015
Ok, I admit that I mostly skimmed this chapter as it was so similar to the other one that I finished a minute ago, but I read the different part, and am very curious about how this will alter the story. Now back to Bug Boy I go.
La3nus chapter 1 . 5/13/2015
I'm glad you said what the difference was because I didn't notice. Anyway I am on the edge of my seat here, Temari and Fuu are two of my favourite kunoichi. Keep going and stay strong.
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